time table

time table

 

 

strangers meet

dearly beloveds crash

new blood from the injuries

 

 

erin-cilberto

4/26/24

Reviews

[DIVYA]

A meeting with disastrous consequences. Ones they were ill prepared for. Perhaps, life moved swiftly. An intriguing poem. I want to know more.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I , also, want to know more.
Thank you and I really like the avatar.
j.

[Weeping willow]

Speaking few lines, yet saying so much ;-} Meeting of strangers can be either nice or fatal. Nicely spoken

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, willow,
j.

[John the Baptist]

This has to be the most inclusive encapsulation I have ever seen. In three lines it takes us from first meeting to unhappily ever after. Sounds like an ongoing thing. May or may not improve.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, John,
j.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, John,
j.

[Thomas W Case]

Tremendous work. Powerful words.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, Thomas,
j.

[MomzillaNC]

Death in three lines. Tragic, but well penned.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, MomZ

[MomzillaNC]

yvw 😎

[mae]

new eyes. only three lines but you managed to capture so many moments. really played to the reader’s emotions. well done -mabel

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, mabel,
j.

[Chris Shaw]

From meeting to ending, in seventeen brilliant syllables.

From anticipation, excitement and passion through to coolness, blood letting and the grave, and without doubt a myriad of other emotions in between.

Ace!!

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, Chris,
j.

[Soren]

What more metaphoric painting of passion and the sexual act leading to propagation. So metaphoric, brief, with clear images cast in a meaningful message that can be extrapolated from Darwin, to morality or lack there of, to family and generalized to all of life. Jacob you never cease to amaze me with your writes.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I appreciate what you said here,
j.

[Andrew John]

Yuk! I mean, this is joy! Er . . . But you see where I'm coming from. I think I enjoyed it!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Ya think? ha ha.
thanks, Andrew,
j.

[Poetic Beauty]

Oh boy to me this sounds like nightmare nuptials. I maybe off the mark but that is what came to mind for me

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, P.B.
j.