'Vague' Senryu
A Poem by Frieda P
What is the question?
"Man is the sum of his parts."
That's a vague answer.
© 2013 Frieda P
Author's Note
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Written after a bizarre testosterone inflamed discussion. You don't wanna know.
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Men and woman are different. I believe world would be a better place if woman ran the world. Woman would think more about sending sons and daughter to war. I believe. A interesting poem. Open the door to a wide open discussion.
Coyote
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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11 Years Ago
Exactly, thank you Coyote, that was my point in the discussion I had last night...!
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11 Years Ago
may i comment? ok..if so, if woman has the power to do that, what stops her? if she can lead the wor.. read moremay i comment? ok..if so, if woman has the power to do that, what stops her? if she can lead the world, she must do it, not wait for permission!
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11 Years Ago
There's too much testosterone in the atmospheric pressure.
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11 Years Ago
oh really? i think this is only in the spot where you are sitting, try to change where you are..you .. read moreoh really? i think this is only in the spot where you are sitting, try to change where you are..you will feel better. its so fresh and breezing here, i provide you with a tube of fresh oxygen if that helps
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11 Years Ago
geez...who peed in your frootloops today?
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11 Years Ago
im sure it wasnt you..
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11 Years Ago
ok this is soooo very confusing, i do agree with coyote anf Frieda though, i mean yeah the world wou.. read moreok this is soooo very confusing, i do agree with coyote anf Frieda though, i mean yeah the world would be a much better place if ran by a woan ;)
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11 Years Ago
Welcome Aurora, and go you! ;-)
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11 Years Ago
hehehehe go girls ;) and Coyote :)
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11 Years Ago
i dont care if i face many at a time, im always used to that. what i want to say is, if woman wanna .. read morei dont care if i face many at a time, im always used to that. what i want to say is, if woman wanna lead the world, she is said to be half the population, she can do it..does a leader need a permission to lead??
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11 Years Ago
if she is too weak to lead, then she will be always led..btw, i respect woman, she is mother, sister.. read moreif she is too weak to lead, then she will be always led..btw, i respect woman, she is mother, sister, daughter, friend...but really she must be strong enough to lead..im waiting to see what she may do!
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11 Years Ago
How many world leaders are women compared to men, would be one helluva takeover....we're still secon.. read moreHow many world leaders are women compared to men, would be one helluva takeover....we're still second class citizen no matter where you live, we earn less, do 3's the work, yadayadayada....
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11 Years Ago
yea girls can go but till where? the best people in all life aspects are men. even in cooking! i wai.. read moreyea girls can go but till where? the best people in all life aspects are men. even in cooking! i wait to see a female president of USA, isnt it strange the most democratic country in the world never led by a woman? who elected all those men?havent women shared in that?
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11 Years Ago
'the best people in all life aspects are men'!! bit your freaking tongue!
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11 Years Ago
you prove what i say! why does woman accept to be 3rd class? if she wanna lead the world, she must d.. read moreyou prove what i say! why does woman accept to be 3rd class? if she wanna lead the world, she must do something
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11 Years Ago
I dare you to be a woman just one day, even though we have bigger kahunas than you, it'd still be ne.. read moreI dare you to be a woman just one day, even though we have bigger kahunas than you, it'd still be near impossible!
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11 Years Ago
shakespear is a man right? prophets were men, right? who is your favorite actor?singer? arent they m.. read moreshakespear is a man right? prophets were men, right? who is your favorite actor?singer? arent they men?armstrong?me?haha..but women are still good since you are one of them..(as i think)
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11 Years Ago
Okay that one was below the belt khalid, I'm more woman than you could ever handle. First off this .. read moreOkay that one was below the belt khalid, I'm more woman than you could ever handle. First off this was not a question of women taking over the world, you went off the beaten path to make this a pissing match. Obviously we all know you can aim further than I can, that's human Anatomy and Biology 101. That just makes us different which is what I was stating in the first place with my first rather obnoxious opponent in this debate.
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11 Years Ago
you mean to tell me that the great spirit isn't female? hmmm, makes no sense, since propagation of l.. read moreyou mean to tell me that the great spirit isn't female? hmmm, makes no sense, since propagation of life requires ova....
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11 Years Ago
blahblahblahblahblah....you better be on the side of the ovaries ;-)
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11 Years Ago
oh, i learned long ago that woman is not only the deadlier of the species, but also the stronger and.. read moreoh, i learned long ago that woman is not only the deadlier of the species, but also the stronger and smarter.....allay your fears....i am your humble servant
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11 Years Ago
Wow, and I didn't even have to get my whip out. ;-)
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11 Years Ago
please no, not that....
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11 Years Ago
Marie Curie, Helen keller, Ann Frank, Emily and Charlote Bronte, Jane Austin, Amilia Aerheart, mothe.. read moreMarie Curie, Helen keller, Ann Frank, Emily and Charlote Bronte, Jane Austin, Amilia Aerheart, mother Teresa, Juane of arc, queen Zanobia, Cleopatra, shall I go on? there is an old arabian saying: ''behind every great man there is a great woman'' so stop saying that women can't lead my friend for we already do.
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11 Years Ago
not to mention...Joan of Arc, Marie Antoinette and Annie Oakley
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11 Years Ago
yup yup, wonderful write Frieda!
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11 Years Ago
yup yup, wonderful write Frieda!
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11 Years Ago
Guess that stopped him in his tracks...way to stick together ladies and Quinn - thanks to you too fo.. read moreGuess that stopped him in his tracks...way to stick together ladies and Quinn - thanks to you too for taking one for the ladies team. :)
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11 Years Ago
The world may be a better place if women had more of an active role in shaping policy, I believe tha.. read moreThe world may be a better place if women had more of an active role in shaping policy, I believe that. But complaining about men and their "inflamed" hormones won't get us there. Action will. I for one would like to see that take place
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11 Years Ago
Why is there a deleted post?
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11 Years Ago
i didnt say that woman cant lead, i said since she can, why doesnt she? if she says that is because .. read morei didnt say that woman cant lead, i said since she can, why doesnt she? if she says that is because man doesnt allow her, it means man is stronger then. and again let me ask, who elected all the men presidents?havent women shared in it? let me confess, if there are two candidates, a man and a woman, im sure that men will choose the man even if the woman was better..do women do the same? if women can lead, they better feel self confident in each others abilities..anyways, statistics say that 65%of female employees prefer their boss at work to be a man..check it!
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11 Years Ago
A good example of a good leader. Hillary Clinton. She fixed Korea and was the key person in the Midd.. read moreA good example of a good leader. Hillary Clinton. She fixed Korea and was the key person in the Middle East. When she leave us. A great woman will be missed. I believe Hilary was the President. We would have no debt and less war. She had respect. Our male president had little. There was a female woman in Jordan. She held the country together. Woman are far from perfect. But better to lead with your heart then soldiers and guns.
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11 Years Ago
Very well said :)
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Men and woman are different. I believe world would be a better place if woman ran the world. Woman would think more about sending sons and daughter to war. I believe. A interesting poem. Open the door to a wide open discussion.
Coyote
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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11 Years Ago
Exactly, thank you Coyote, that was my point in the discussion I had last night...!
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11 Years Ago
may i comment? ok..if so, if woman has the power to do that, what stops her? if she can lead the wor.. read moremay i comment? ok..if so, if woman has the power to do that, what stops her? if she can lead the world, she must do it, not wait for permission!
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11 Years Ago
There's too much testosterone in the atmospheric pressure.
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11 Years Ago
oh really? i think this is only in the spot where you are sitting, try to change where you are..you .. read moreoh really? i think this is only in the spot where you are sitting, try to change where you are..you will feel better. its so fresh and breezing here, i provide you with a tube of fresh oxygen if that helps
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11 Years Ago
geez...who peed in your frootloops today?
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11 Years Ago
im sure it wasnt you..
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11 Years Ago
ok this is soooo very confusing, i do agree with coyote anf Frieda though, i mean yeah the world wou.. read moreok this is soooo very confusing, i do agree with coyote anf Frieda though, i mean yeah the world would be a much better place if ran by a woan ;)
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11 Years Ago
Welcome Aurora, and go you! ;-)
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11 Years Ago
hehehehe go girls ;) and Coyote :)
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11 Years Ago
i dont care if i face many at a time, im always used to that. what i want to say is, if woman wanna .. read morei dont care if i face many at a time, im always used to that. what i want to say is, if woman wanna lead the world, she is said to be half the population, she can do it..does a leader need a permission to lead??
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11 Years Ago
if she is too weak to lead, then she will be always led..btw, i respect woman, she is mother, sister.. read moreif she is too weak to lead, then she will be always led..btw, i respect woman, she is mother, sister, daughter, friend...but really she must be strong enough to lead..im waiting to see what she may do!
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11 Years Ago
How many world leaders are women compared to men, would be one helluva takeover....we're still secon.. read moreHow many world leaders are women compared to men, would be one helluva takeover....we're still second class citizen no matter where you live, we earn less, do 3's the work, yadayadayada....
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11 Years Ago
yea girls can go but till where? the best people in all life aspects are men. even in cooking! i wai.. read moreyea girls can go but till where? the best people in all life aspects are men. even in cooking! i wait to see a female president of USA, isnt it strange the most democratic country in the world never led by a woman? who elected all those men?havent women shared in that?
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11 Years Ago
'the best people in all life aspects are men'!! bit your freaking tongue!
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11 Years Ago
you prove what i say! why does woman accept to be 3rd class? if she wanna lead the world, she must d.. read moreyou prove what i say! why does woman accept to be 3rd class? if she wanna lead the world, she must do something
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11 Years Ago
I dare you to be a woman just one day, even though we have bigger kahunas than you, it'd still be ne.. read moreI dare you to be a woman just one day, even though we have bigger kahunas than you, it'd still be near impossible!
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11 Years Ago
shakespear is a man right? prophets were men, right? who is your favorite actor?singer? arent they m.. read moreshakespear is a man right? prophets were men, right? who is your favorite actor?singer? arent they men?armstrong?me?haha..but women are still good since you are one of them..(as i think)
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11 Years Ago
Okay that one was below the belt khalid, I'm more woman than you could ever handle. First off this .. read moreOkay that one was below the belt khalid, I'm more woman than you could ever handle. First off this was not a question of women taking over the world, you went off the beaten path to make this a pissing match. Obviously we all know you can aim further than I can, that's human Anatomy and Biology 101. That just makes us different which is what I was stating in the first place with my first rather obnoxious opponent in this debate.
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11 Years Ago
you mean to tell me that the great spirit isn't female? hmmm, makes no sense, since propagation of l.. read moreyou mean to tell me that the great spirit isn't female? hmmm, makes no sense, since propagation of life requires ova....
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11 Years Ago
blahblahblahblahblah....you better be on the side of the ovaries ;-)
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11 Years Ago
oh, i learned long ago that woman is not only the deadlier of the species, but also the stronger and.. read moreoh, i learned long ago that woman is not only the deadlier of the species, but also the stronger and smarter.....allay your fears....i am your humble servant
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11 Years Ago
Wow, and I didn't even have to get my whip out. ;-)
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11 Years Ago
please no, not that....
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11 Years Ago
Marie Curie, Helen keller, Ann Frank, Emily and Charlote Bronte, Jane Austin, Amilia Aerheart, mothe.. read moreMarie Curie, Helen keller, Ann Frank, Emily and Charlote Bronte, Jane Austin, Amilia Aerheart, mother Teresa, Juane of arc, queen Zanobia, Cleopatra, shall I go on? there is an old arabian saying: ''behind every great man there is a great woman'' so stop saying that women can't lead my friend for we already do.
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11 Years Ago
not to mention...Joan of Arc, Marie Antoinette and Annie Oakley
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11 Years Ago
yup yup, wonderful write Frieda!
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11 Years Ago
yup yup, wonderful write Frieda!
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11 Years Ago
Guess that stopped him in his tracks...way to stick together ladies and Quinn - thanks to you too fo.. read moreGuess that stopped him in his tracks...way to stick together ladies and Quinn - thanks to you too for taking one for the ladies team. :)
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This comment has been deleted by the poster.
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11 Years Ago
The world may be a better place if women had more of an active role in shaping policy, I believe tha.. read moreThe world may be a better place if women had more of an active role in shaping policy, I believe that. But complaining about men and their "inflamed" hormones won't get us there. Action will. I for one would like to see that take place
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11 Years Ago
Why is there a deleted post?
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11 Years Ago
i didnt say that woman cant lead, i said since she can, why doesnt she? if she says that is because .. read morei didnt say that woman cant lead, i said since she can, why doesnt she? if she says that is because man doesnt allow her, it means man is stronger then. and again let me ask, who elected all the men presidents?havent women shared in it? let me confess, if there are two candidates, a man and a woman, im sure that men will choose the man even if the woman was better..do women do the same? if women can lead, they better feel self confident in each others abilities..anyways, statistics say that 65%of female employees prefer their boss at work to be a man..check it!
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11 Years Ago
A good example of a good leader. Hillary Clinton. She fixed Korea and was the key person in the Midd.. read moreA good example of a good leader. Hillary Clinton. She fixed Korea and was the key person in the Middle East. When she leave us. A great woman will be missed. I believe Hilary was the President. We would have no debt and less war. She had respect. Our male president had little. There was a female woman in Jordan. She held the country together. Woman are far from perfect. But better to lead with your heart then soldiers and guns.
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11 Years Ago
Very well said :)
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i think the question in your mind is..why are men so weird? isnt this answer applying for women as well?
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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11 Years Ago
hmmm weird wasn't the exact adjective! We're never vague ;-)
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11 Years Ago
you are never vague to yourselves as women, men arent vague to me as well..
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11 Years Ago
don't make me slap you :-)
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11 Years Ago
i dont think it is a good idea if you do because if you slap me, your palm will hurt you
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11 Years Ago
you've just proven my point, you have a hard head ;-)
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11 Years Ago
thats what im told
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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..
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