Music Senryu

Senryu challenge by New Yawk Steve

Satisfaction~The Rolling Stones

No girly action

even the devil knew my game

satisfaction sucks

Landslide~Fleetwood Mac

Saw my reflection

life changes of my  seasons

afraid of falling

Like A Rolling Stone~Bob Dylan

I used to be fine

now I have to compromise

on my own, unknown

Summertime~Janis Joplin

Living is breezy

no tears for the weary rich

No one can harm you

Jack & Diane~John Mellencamp

Two kids rocking on

beat goes on after it fizzles 

changes to real life

Born in the USA~Bruce Springsteen

Born American

made me kill my fellow man

Dark red, white & blue 

Nights In White Satin~Moody Blue

Hear black emptiness

Letters written, never sent

yet, still I love you

Kinks~You Really Got Me

I can't sleep at night

no clue what I am doing

you really got me

Sweet Child O'Mine~Guns & Roses

Her hair safe and warm

recalling sweet childhood

where do we go now?

A Thousand Kisses Deep~Leonard Cohen!

Streak runs a while

Seems real, yet boogie defeat

Kisses my soul deep

Reviews

[Rita L. Sev]

Complete and total awesomeness, Frieda! Landslide is one of my all time favorite songs. These are all great! Steve is getting the Ladies to bring it tonight!

[SteveB]

(Steve hasn't been able to have the ladies bring it in years)

[Rita L. Sev]

Haha! Seriously laughing here. Steve, you are our Muse tonight!

[Frieda P]

Hahaha, that actually made me laugh out loud! Thanks Rita...!

[SteveB]

(Being laughed at by the ladies explains why he can't make then bring it)

[Frieda P]

Awh, with you hon, not at you. ;-)

[Rita L. Sev]

Ditto!

[Quill~]

This rocks!... loved them all, but my fave is Summertime~Janis Joplin.
I used to sing Me and Bobby McGee...memories... *sniff*
awesome write!

[Frieda P]

Ha, sang Me & Bobby McGee at Karaoke one night drunk...omg!! Love Janis too, thanks Quill....!

[Quill~]

drunk as a skunk?... yep, me too... that's what it took for me (to get the nerve) to sing. whatever works right? :D Woot woot!

[Frieda P]

Ha I can't sing sober or drunk, when I saw it afterwards I nearly died! Lol

[Quill~]

*he he* the opposite happens for me... I sing like a beautiful bird. ;)
(not really) lol

[Frieda P]

I should have stuck to dancing, demon alcohol! ha ;-)

[Quill~]

damn devil's wine! ;)