Monkey Business Flush

~an old rant that still holds true

Pun is blinding me in your lies

the party's over, I took part of the blame

you keep slapping me with jim beam knocks out

screwed me over again in front of friends

thought I knew you, but you're a stranger now

your cherry facade is such a farce

how dare you speak of peace & love

your poetry is like a coffee enema

you drew first blood and kept the blood flowing

why don't you show them your true colors

yellow like the beer you guzzle 

preaching like a choir boy is an insult 

slip your sloppy a*s back in your bottle of booze

isn't that where you bought your truth

down for the count, it's only a matter of time

before you blow your own cover

you wouldn't know love

 if it punched you upside the head

thanks for the lesson of a lifetime

cheers, now go drown in your sorrowful toilet

where you usually hang your head

Author's Note

Reviews

[Jack...]

Girl, when you swing a 2x4, you really swing it. Glad I was standing back when I read this one, that would've hurt. I do however know exactly what you are saying and it is unfortunate that an older rant can still be relevant. Remind me never to get on your bad side. Very cool my friend.

[Frieda P]

Takes quite a bit to get there Jack, but once you've hit my limit, watch the fook out...ha ;-) Thanks my friend.

[Angel]

Someone got too close to the sexy vampire's cage, and got bitten!!
Hmmmm....anyone I know????''

[Frieda P]

Ha we'll tawk later Angel. ;-)

[Baby Ricochet]

Good rant. I feel you......................

[Frieda P]

Thanks Baby..........................

[Dye]

Sooooo........tell me how you really feel. lol I saw the title and just knew it would be some sort of poop flinging write. hahahaha Damn monkeys! You pack quite the punch Frieda, I hope I never piss you off. But if I do, at least you would tell me off with style.

[Frieda P]

Some people just push your buttons and don't know when to quit, can't leave well enough alone, I'm sure you know the type I speak of, ha we've had this discussion before, and never happen Dye, you're too fookin cute in that pic of yours! lol ;-)

[Dye]

Note to self: "half naked pictures sell" lol

I know the type you're talking about.

[Frieda P]

LOL as if you didn't know....haha

[Dye]

Haha--- ya, I didn't think I would get away with that. lol

[icelandicblue]

Oh...I see why you waited to post this for public consumption. Are the barflies swarming around again? I am happy we're friends!

[Frieda P]

Yes, you mean you didn't smell the shyte Anne? Ha, you know that'd never happen, you're a decent human being...

[TL Boehm]

its the funny thing about rants. I remember the perp more than I remember the object of love poems. Wait. I don't write beautiful love poems. I'm always ranting about or at someone or something. I'm a werepoet.
But this is good. It reminds me a bit of my mom. There is angst where my mom is concerned. Much foamy angst.

[Frieda P]

Ooooh, foamy angst I like that, I might have to steal that one Tam...and this is in NO way a love poem...ha tawk about foamy angst.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. You are in a feisty and fighting mood lol
I hope it did rain on your parade or someone pissed you off. A powerful poem with a knockout punch..:)

[Frieda P]

I'm blaming the flu medication, that's my story and I'm sticking to it! ;-) Thanks muchly Sami.

[Sami Khalil]

Hahaha. I see now...:)

[Frieda P]

It didn't come from Switzerland either, if you catch my drift...lol ;-)

[Sami Khalil]

Hahaha. I get it...:)

[Lydia Shutter]

A vent that is so powerful, I almost could hear the boxing ring bell ringing at the end of it. Don't know to whom you have directed this, but, hell, I would not want to be him/her! How some people can pretend to be pure as the driven snow when you know full well they are wallowing in the mud is beyond me. Why don't others see what you see? Is the rest of the world so blind? Sometimes I wonder. Frieda, I hope this one slapped the poet upside the head. It is super! Lydi**

[Frieda P]

I don't know Lydi, I have none of the answers, I think most people don't want to get involved so they hold their tongue, exactly why there is so much injustice in this world, thanks so much for your insightful review. I have been dealing with this kind of nonsense since I was a kid, so it kind of exploded. ;-)