~Buttermilk Skies~

I loved you blithely through reverie's eyes

 floating like  elusory feathers through my mind

i crashed into you whilst on a stargazing  cloud 

you took my breath away with billowing vibrancy

locked in my caged illusion,  you sang like an angel

never wanted to peek the darkly light of day,

moonstruck delerium fancied  enchanted music,

dancing upon phantasy of pipe dreams

i breathe heavily of infused ether's essence

with hopes for musings of fool's heaven,

never to drift from this castle in the air

soul's glinting on serendipitous meditations

of buttermilk skies and apricot diamonds

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem. I like the description. Took me to good places and thoughts.
"never to drift from this castle in the air
soul's glinting on serendipitous meditations
of buttermilk skies and apricot diamonds"
I like the use of buttermilk skies and apricot diamonds. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Frieda P]

Oh thanks Coyote, I kind of like buttermilk skies and apricot diamonds myself...muchly appreciate your kind words.

[SyberRose]

Enjoyed your grace of words Frieda. Poignantly bittersweet fantasy
with an aura of butterscotch skies and apricot diamonds...Beautifully penned as always...Rose

[Frieda P]

Thanks Rose, jazzed you enjoyed. :-)

[Sami Khalil]

"i breathe heavily of infused ether's essence

with hopes for musings of fool's heaven,

never to drift from this castle in the air"

I like the tilte alot and this wonderful poem. Fool's heaven with castles in the air is very powerful imagery...Splendid...:)

[Frieda P]

Thanks muchly for your gracious review Sami, jazzed you enjoyed this one :-)

[Sami Khalil]

I'm always jazzed...You are welcome...:)

[Frieda P]

Ha good we can be jazzy together then. ;-)

[Sami Khalil]

^^~^^ :)................

[Jack...]

Buttermilk skies and apricot diamonds...can it get any more beautiful than that...I think not. Frieda, this poem is a smooth as buttermilk and as precious as diamonds. Sinceritiy flows from this wirte, it is evident that this has come from somewhere deep inside of your heart, for it moves in such a melodic rhthym. Without dreaming, I dream. Without seeing, I see. Without hearing, I hear and without knowing, I know. So many ways this touches my heart, for even if I was not breathing I would still feel it.

Amazing my sweet friend.

[Frieda P]

Wow Jack thanks that's potent, but please don't stop breathing, we'd miss your poetry and I know for sure I'd miss your friendship dear friend...