~Buttermilk Skies~

I loved you blithely through reverie's eyes

 floating like  elusory feathers through my mind

i crashed into you whilst on a stargazing  cloud 

you took my breath away with billowing vibrancy

locked in my caged illusion,  you sang like an angel

never wanted to peek the darkly light of day,

moonstruck delerium fancied  enchanted music,

dancing upon phantasy of pipe dreams

i breathe heavily of infused ether's essence

with hopes for musings of fool's heaven,

never to drift from this castle in the air

soul's glinting on serendipitous meditations

of buttermilk skies and apricot diamonds

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem. I like the description. Took me to good places and thoughts.
"never to drift from this castle in the air
soul's glinting on serendipitous meditations
of buttermilk skies and apricot diamonds"
I like the use of buttermilk skies and apricot diamonds. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Frieda P]

Oh thanks Coyote, I kind of like buttermilk skies and apricot diamonds myself...muchly appreciate your kind words.

[MsJewel]

The imagery in your poem is stunning... Your words float like the elsory feathers you speak of taking the reader into a dream like place of buttermilk skies and apricot diamonds. Stunning, stunning poetry my friend and definitely a new favorite. :) Julie

[Frieda P]

I'm thrilled Julie, thanks so much. :-)

[kublakhan27]

You took my breath away with billowing vibrancy...that sounds very much like the effect your words always have on me Mrs.R :) You have a signature style yet every piece has little elements that make them unique, which is the best writing style to have...in this piece, it was the delicacy-inspired metaphors of the title and the end...sing on angel ;)

[Frieda P]

Wow Benji, another one of your reviews going into my favorites! Thanks so much :-)

[kublakhan27]

Always a pleasure my dear friend :)

[annie lee]

Wow, there is some gorgeous imagery in this poem. You build a magical mood. I suppose this could be about two lovers, but it could also be a metaphor for that which drives your spirit, be it your muse or simply a desire to always embrace what you love.

[Frieda P]

Thanks annie lee, name change I see, funny thing is I thought your name was Lee, weird huh? Always enjoy your insightful reviews....

[Tom]

A reflective rhapsody of dreamy, blissful days shared with a lover !

And a passionately, poetic account it certainly was Freida !

[Frieda P]

Grazie mille Tom!

[Tom]

Sei il benvenuto al mio amico ! ...had to google again but it's the thought that counts Frieda I'm sure you'd agree ?

[Frieda P]

Always the thought my sweet friend, but it would be 'amica', female, can't always trust google. ;-) Much appreciated!

[Tom]

I concede once more to your superior knowledge & fluency of the Italian language !

[Frieda P]

Believe me it's not much, mostly the words drunken sailors utter! haha

[Glen Yumang Manese]

The usage of language here...Frieda...each line is riddled in them with words you use to convey this rather effective poem...as a reader this has much to say for 13 lines of poetry...

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Glen, jazzed you enjoyed, and no complaints about the font, that's always a plus. ;-)

[Glen Yumang Manese]

You're welcome...I just let this one slide...

[Frieda P]

You're funny. ;-)

[Leslie Philibert]

As Jack`s notes well, a poem full of beauty, like Buttermilk skies too...

[Frieda P]

Thank you Leslie, and I'll have to thank Jack again too...

[Barbara Walker]

Sounds like a place I'd like to go at least once in a while!

[Frieda P]

Think I could live there, thanks Barbara!

[Troy Henson]

A beautiful piece Frieda. The flow was wonderful in this and held a nice even tone all the way through.

Regards
Troy

[Frieda P]

Thanks muchly Troy.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

interesting imagery with nice alliteration, magical movement of words and rhythm here.

jacob

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much jacob, glad you enjoyed.

[Anand Sehgal]

i breathe heavily of infused ether's essence
with hopes for musings of fool's heaven,
never to drift from this castle in the air

so dreamy. so creamy :) tasty

[Frieda P]

Grazie mille Anand. :-)