~Autumn of my heart...

~Autumn of my heart...

A Poem by Frieda P
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Thank you sweet petulia (Emma Joy) for the luverly pic and inspiration.

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There is a place of calm within my soul, an autumn that wraps around my heart that reminisces young and vintage memories where old friends visit, share the warmth of coffee, that place of colorful reverie whispers my name blush of summer gone and renewal has begun
shades of firewood on wood burning stoves as spirited leaves begin to fall to their demise I catch the memories like snowflakes on the tongue waiting in the shadows, a stoic season ready to nip its chill in this moment I relish the burnished views afore the golden, fruition of a gathering equinox of thoughts they dance amongst the scarlet hues playfully amused until old man winter comes to tuck them in yet again 


© 2013 Frieda P


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"that reminisces young and vintage memories where old friends visit, share the warmth of coffee,"
I enjoyed the poem. The above is my favorite. Would be nice to gather with old friends. To be able to talk till we can't no more. Thank you for the memories and amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Thanks Coyote, glad you enjoyed.



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How very beautiful Frieda. So warm and delicate and inviting. I loved every line of imagery here. Another into my faves!

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Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Thanks so much wordwarrior!
A nice, smooth read for a cool evening and sipping on a warm drink. Well done!

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Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Thanks Sirrah.
Autumn preserves memories like still shot photographs. There is certainly something preternatural about the season. Death is often feared, but the Fall comforts the soul within beauty. Subjectively, the Fall is a celebration of the dead rather than melancholy. It reminds us that the human essence still lingers after we pass.

Thank you for sharing!

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Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Your review is poetry in itself Ria, thanks so much.
Vria P Crow

10 Years Ago

Awe, thank you, Freida! And your welcome!
Autumn does indeed evoke fond memories and strengthens the kindred spirit of folk as they prepare for the winter season encroaching !

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Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Thanks Tom.
Another good poem, I have read a number of fine Autumn poems the last week...

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Frieda P

10 Years Ago

There are definitely quite a few great Autumn ones out and about, thanks Leslie.
they dance amongst the scarlet hues playfully amused
until old man winter comes to tuck them in yet again

Close this piece of beauty with a fantastic metaphor. Lovely.

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Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Thanks so much Pryde.
Oh dear friend across the ocean, 'has been a day and a half so maybe why your beautiful words have reached right inside me and calmed what's been and is a tense spirit. You've near displayed a series of miniatures calling me/us to feel the joy and beauty of the season and to know what lies ahead is promise and hope with capital letters. Your phrasing in this poem is truly magical, spiritual, sincere -soothing. I love it

'.. I relish the burnished views afore the golden, fruition of a gathering equinox of thoughts ~ they dance amongst the scarlet hues playfully amused ~ until old man winter comes to tuck them in yet again'

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Frieda P

10 Years Ago

LOL that makes two of us!! ;-)
emmajoy

10 Years Ago

see my message.. trick and treating here we come - bags I have the cauldron!
Frieda P

10 Years Ago

I'll brew up some magic potions..ha!
"...as spirited leaves begin to fall to their demise
I catch the memories like snowflakes on the tongue..."

You have captured the essence of autumn (my favorite time of year) so beautifully. But, unfortunately, the crispness of autumn fades into the coldness of winter. Perfection, dear Frieda. Bravo!

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Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Thanks Rebecca, jazzed you enjoyed!
A lovely picture...not just of Autumn but of its meaning...

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Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Thanks Marie.
As eloquent an evocation of Autumn as I've read in quite some time, particularly with regards to its relationship with Winter. The way you relay the transition between the seasons is letter-perfect. You continue to knock me out with incomparable poetry my dear :)

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Frieda P

10 Years Ago

You humble me Steve, and knowing winter is your favorite month, I thought you might enjoy this one, .. read more
kublakhan27

10 Years Ago

Haha Oh yes, I'm aware cuz many people point it out to me ;) I just find it a million times easier t.. read more

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