...and then you touched me

........and then you touched me

not in the usual fashion,

but deep within my soul's fancy

a fondling embrace that took flight

clutch'd and pique'd every relevant moment thereafter

life would forever be changed         yet

most everything stayed the same

except for deep within the recesses of time

breath stood still and the imprint within my heart,

lasting well beyond a lifetime of  endlessness 

still just a mere drop of water in an infinite sea

oftentimes, especially when it rains blissfully

i think of how you enveloped me for perpetuity 

Author's Note

Reviews

[MsJewel]

It is interesting how that one touch - perhaps fleeting - can stay with us forever...

Your poem reminds me of the first time my daughter wrapped her tiny hand around my finger and I knew nothing would ever feel like that again...nothing would ever be the same.

A beautiful poem my friend. You have touched my heart with this one.

:) Julie

[Frieda P]

Awh what a sweet memory, exactly Julie, thanks so much! :-)

[Ken Simm.]

These words may be only drops in a sea of time but they define the tides. Welcome back.

[Frieda P]

Defining the tides, I like that idea, thanks Ken.

[Chris]

I'm glad you found ...you could return. We missed you.

[Frieda P]

Missed you too Chris. Thanks....

[Cryingkate]

Absolutely Beautiful and Photos too ! Beautifully packaged presentation from a Beautiful heart

[Frieda P]

Thanks Connie, you're too kind.

[Jack...]

I have been trying to review this beautiful poem for the past. 20 minutes and still the proper words elude me. "Still just a mere drop of water in an infinite sea " We are all just drops of water in the seas of our lives and those of others. But it does takes these droplets to form these oceans. I loved this poem...I truly loved it. This is definitely going into my favorites.

[Frieda P]

Awwh as always you humble me sweet man, thanks so much, you are truly appreciated my dear friend.

[Joyce S. Greene]

I loved this one, Frieda. A stunning love poem, indeed. Great work! (PS - I'm a big Streisand fan, have listened to that album innumerable time when songs were still played on a record player.)

[Frieda P]

She's such a great voice, unique, thanks Joyce, glad you enjoyed.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. The title , the poem , the wording and the music were all great and lovely...Bravo.............

[Frieda P]

Thanks Sami, jazzed you enjoyed. :-)

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...Any time...:).................

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Excellent choice of words and images!

Perfect ending lines:
"oftentimes, especially when it rains blissfully
i think of how you enveloped me for perpetuity"

I am a lover of rain, Frieda. In one of my poems, I have also mentioned this line:
"because when it rains, I see you here..."

Such a piece with elegance! So splendid.

[Frieda P]

Thanks for your glowing words Dhaye, muchly appreciated.......

[Coyote Poetry]

Artwork and poetry was amazing. A simple touch can start a unstoppable desire. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Frieda P]

Thanks Coyote glad you enjoyed.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Swaying, mixed and makes one long for the embraces of old, the ones that truly moved us, well done, good read.

[Frieda P]

Swaying with you love, thanks Thomas.