Serendipitous Uncertainties

Collaboration Jack & Frieda Gorgeous piano piece composed by Jack also..........

Logic, never etch'd within love

broken galaxies bent with regrets

star clusters came unglued under pressure

reasoning bit the dust'd path

comet tails exceed the limit

delusional constellations play with fate

staring up becomes looking down

on night path footprints’ maze  

heart's exploded into fragment'd cinders

hanging onto darkly serendipitous uncertainties

waiting for crystal azure skies to sheen upon

twists of destiny's dismal glitz again

still fractur’d moonbeams

broke rank in obsolete formations

collecting emotion’d confessions

draped by black velvet sighs

wishing upon radiant eventide

whilst dancin' amidst twilight's glimmers

waves crashing sympathies last grasp

that dusky nightfall brings us sunrises

once eclips’d by passion’s shade

looking directly upon its hidden glow

wind’d breaths of amber blushing

sing sweet lullabies to morning’s harmony

Author's Note

Reviews

[Justine]

Frieda and Jack...just...WOW.
This is an amazing write, superb opening stanza with metaphor to die for. A sad story of love dripping away, something I can relate to. I havent done the soundcloud thing yet, but I will soon. Just writing in between other stuff. I love your poetry, it's always something unique and interesting. Justine :)

[Frieda P]

Doing the happy dance, thanks so much Justine! :-)

[Jack...]

Justine, your wonderful review has me smiling this morning as I can tell Frieda was yesterday. Any chance I have to work with Frieda is a dream come true for me.

[Vidya Bacchus]

You both work so effortlessly together.Sometimes love doesn't last.

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

This drips with metaphorical brilliance and tangible emotion that is complex, yet reachable. Awesomely done you two!

[Frieda P]

Thrilled you enjoyed our collaboration Travis, thanks so much!

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

How fabulous, you two work so well together a wordsmith and fantasist joined in a happy marriage, how exciting! If you ever need and injection of horrific fear and blood, look me up! x well done my darlings x

[Frieda P]

Sounds like a plan darling, might take you up on that! x

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

When you two get together it becomes an amazing read that can't be out done ever!

[Frieda P]

So thrilled Josie, thanks a million!

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

You are welcome! Both of you~

[Rita L. Sev]

wishing upon radiant eventide
whilst dancin' amidst twilight's glimmers...

I am always blown away when you two collaborate. Beautiful work!

[Frieda P]

Wooo, thanks for that glowing review Rita!

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much Rita. Thrilled you enjoyed this one.

[Poetic Beauty]

This makes me think of someone sitting outside at night wondering what the fate of their love will be for it seems to be slipping into the ether. Great details with space and the comets tail.

[Frieda P]

What a sweet thought, thanks so much PB....

[Poetic Beauty]

You are welcome. I loved the details in this piece.

[Frieda P]

Thanks again, thrilled you enjoyed, Jack is a joy to work with too.

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much my friend. Frieda is the inspiration behind all of this. She is an amazing talent

[Poetic Beauty]

It reads as if your talents merge together very well

[Kellyrose]

A beautiful write set to beautiful music

[Frieda P]

Thanks for your visit and review, Jack compose'd the music, glad you enjoyed...

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much Kelly. Frieda is a joy to work with.

[MsJewel]

still fractur’d moonbeams
broke rank in obsolete formations
collecting emotion’d confessions
draped by black velvet sighs
Stunning, stunning collaboration and the music is just as lovely!
:) Julie

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Julie, you pick'd my favorite too, glad you enjoyed! :-)

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much Julie. My dreams always come true when I get to write with Frieda.

[Raymond Federle]

"still fractur’d moonbeams broke rank in obsolete formations collecting emotion’d confessions draped by black velvet sighs" WOW, Frieda..... just WOW! Got me all twitterpated... :P

[Frieda P]

Hate to burst your bubble Raymond, Jack wrote those lines, ha thanks! ;-)

[Raymond Federle]

Wait a min let me check......... Yep still twitterpated. :)

[Frieda P]

Ha that's good, thanks again, Jack will be excited ;-)

[Jack...]

Wow I don't believe I have ever been involved in twitterpating anyone before. Thanks so much for your kind words.