`once in a twilight glean‏ing ~

Your eyes a familiar vision of silent prayer ~

        once in a redemption's twilight glean

ghostly shadow's communing in reality

     movement of gravity touching in reverse

anamnesis in ascension's awareness

       unburdened of earthly nuances

essence of a spirit's reborn Platonism

moments flood a flawed legacy

   floating above Aurora's freedom

flowing on ethereal dimension’s wings

      whispers of familial souls hush the air 

resurrected sounds on high of angel’s rush

awakened in sensibility's sentimentality

herein lies the beauty of a new beginning

    songs that live on in a token heart's dream

Author's Note

Reviews

[Rene Salinas]

Oh i look forward for this invitations as the anticipation of what will it be is palpable. And today an offering of the realms of the transitory, of the change I think the ondines comes to mind as the lines go on sharing with us not only are they responsible for the physicality of winds but also for the deliverance of wisdom through the ages. The language is soft yet very descriptive, the reference not all that intricate as I was able to find relationships a plenty. And the final paragrah that let's us know that the value of this experiences needs treasuring and appreciated in the most tender of ways.

Oh so tender.

Thankyou very much Frieda.

It is always a pleasure

[Frieda P]

Always a pleasure to read your reviews, you always shine a new light upon my words, thanks so much Rene.

[J. K. Beach]

Such a sad/sweetness in this one, Frieda... but it has depths where, perhaps, only you can go. I can but stand at the doorway and smile... a beacon for your journey. I love the line, 'movement of gravity touching in reverse.' What a cool way to express a rising up... for some reason I get a picture of a thousand white balloons floating gently skyward. As always, your metaphors and penned/painted images are exquisite and so very intriguing. A lovely piece and a fine bit of writing... Superlative job!

[Frieda P]

Oh, I adore your vision J.K. I'm giddily enthralled this piece took you there, thanks so much for your kind words, you humble me my poetic friend.

[Coyote Poetry]

I love your new poetry lately. A more dark tone to the words. Your words described with skill took me into places and questions. No weakness in the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Frieda P]

Thanks Coyote, I go where the wind blows me it seems...muchly appreciate your kind words.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear Frieda.

[Sophy Freebirds]

I love this realm.. ;) you took me to a wonderworld where we are reborn.. our thoughts ressurrect.. Flawless flow.And the vision of this place thrilled me.You have pictured it in your pen.. Beautiful write Freida no exquisite write.

~Sophy

[Frieda P]

I'm thrilled it took you there Sophy, thanks muchly for your kind words my sweet friend. :)

[Sophy Freebirds]

Was my pleasure.. still in the wonderland.. :) pinch me,fast!!

[Frieda P]

Pinch you? Why would you want to leave wonderland? ;)

[Sophy Freebirds]

I can be lost here forever your words have created a mantra. but need to get back to reality ;)

[Frieda P]

Oh sheesh, reality bites. ;) ha

[Einstein Noodle]

i am floating .. on your poem's words, the music and find myself in such appreciation of the mind all that comes from .. words that spring to life color, angels and Plato .. "anamnesis in ascension's awareness" .. are you kidding me!!! how great is that!!? the heck with the sunrise this morning .. i am floating over the dawn sky up north blazing with rainbows that move ..
E.

[Frieda P]

Holy E, you have taken my breath away with your luminous review, grazie mille from the bottom of my poetic heart, I appreciate your friendship so much. x