~bleached out blue jeans and James Dean

just some eye candy for the girls ;)

Bleached out blue jeans

     and broken dreams,

ripping at the seams of my soul

   as you strutted your stuff,

unraveled in lusty affection's turn

torn apart of faded intentions

   inky patches of forget-me-knots

in dyed midnight illusions

     tied to the darkly hue'd' requiem

     of your rogue stylish charms 

killer looks and James Dean appeal

  left me stranded and hooked

     in your game of gangsta's paradise

unbuttoned of chain'd denial

  my heart's anticipation of big dreams

out of rhythm'd time pacin' to an

          old burning promised dance

no rhyme left in 'til the end of time'

Author's Note

Reviews

[kublakhan27]

Ha, you want me to review THIS Mrs.R? ;P First off, yes, I know you're having fun, don't worry...I have this vision of your forehead going right to your palm when you see that question...but I'll be honest, if anyone else besides you wrote this, I'd be swiftly moving on to the next poem...this will be ironic if I get the first review in, insanely ironic if it's the featured one...I'm giggling just thinking about that actually haha ...still it probably won't surprise you that line two is my favourite, and the last line is absolute money...I wonder if my character from that elevator poem is anything like this ;P Nicely done my dear...I wanna go buy some jeans now..xo

[Frieda P]

I was ready and waiting for it ha ha you should see my face...yep facepalm'd it ;) Just trying to loosen you up Benji. I see you got your sense of humor back love. ;) MWAH! xo

[kublakhan27]

Haha I'm doing my best Mrs.R...and it IS the featured review...now that is pretty funny haha MWAH ;) xo

[Frieda P]

Karma baby...haha ;) x

[kublakhan27]

OMG This site...for the third time, let's try this response Mrs.R: Yep, instant karma got me ;) x

[Frieda P]

I know, it's even worse than usual....see, what your step Benji. ;) x

[Tom]

Well I suppose every now and again a bit of ' rough ' can be pleasantly appealing....but has he any ink in his pen would be my concern Frieda ?

A fine poetic ' walk on the wild side ' !

[s y e]

Teehee, if I say I am in heaven will I get slapped? 'Cause damn, that is some hot, hot, hot guys on your page right now Mama F - What the heck was going through your heed when writing this one? Ha! I may be in heaven just looking at them pictures but your poem was awesome, too. I mean, I loved how you wrote it. :) Just the pictures distracted me a little. ;-) Hahahaah!!!

Flip flops & all that jazz! xoxo

[Kayleigh]

Oh la la Frieda, now I know where your mind was when you wrote this! The last line of this poem is absolutely class, I loved it. Why didn't I think of that? ;)) Very, very, very x100 nice poem.

[Avinash]

This pretty much explains why I stick to my rough look . It helps in creating such beautiful poems from some beautiful mind :) Helps in finding the kind soul ;)

[Ashira Macy]

What a sexy but not quite steamy work you have here love! Sort of the PG 13 of poetry.

inky patches of forget-me-knots

I enjoyed the word play of this line, I thought it was clever as you often are. Wonderful work dear!

[Frieda P]

Jazz'd you enjoyed my PC rendition, do they have a banner for PG-13? :)

[Lydia Shutter]

Does "till the end of time" really exist anymore? Not so sure from all I have experienced and seen through the years. Still, there is something about those tight faded jeans draped over the contour of a man like James Dean...that ultimate bad boy. He was our rebel and whether he had a cause or not, we wanted him to be with through the end of time, didn't we? But it was not to be. We are left to write poetry about bad boys like him who left all too soon. A good one, Frieda. Lydi**

[Frieda P]

No I don't think it exists Lydi, people are too into instant gratification these days. I really wrote this just to tease Benji, and it was fun. ;) Ha....just don't tell him....shhh.

[Lydia Shutter]

Oh, I think he will figure it out! LOL

[Frieda P]

He was a bit peeved he had to review it haha

[Lydia Shutter]

Ah, he'll get over it....he's a big boy! LOL

[Frieda P]

Oh c'mon, he's a man, do they ever grow up? LOL....

[Lydia Shutter]

True enough! LOL

[Sophy Freebirds]

Ouch.... oooo babes its too hot out here, hotter than the tropics..this was a serious turn on girl. I had this serious to lick my lip in anticipation.sin incarnate- wouldn't that be fun?? Well i guess you are having a whole lot of chocolaty time which inspires you to write this "burn the tongue poem".. but seriously such man should be banned from society of prim and proper women.. ha ★winks★... i got an eyefull.. i couldn't stop ogling the picture..

~Sophy

[Frieda P]

Jazz'd I could blow your skirt up Sophy That's what the pic was for. ;)

[Sophy Freebirds]

Ooohhh.. so mission accomplished.. ha ;). De nada N***a

[David Scott]

How many times must I ask you not to write poetry about me? :)

We all have desires and turn-ons. Personally, I like to see women admitting they enjoy the shallow yet powerful attractions between the sexes.

Glad to see you feeding the frenzy. Ha. Keep the fires hot baby.

[Frieda P]

Sometimes I just lose my silly head Scott. ;) If you didn't open your big trap no one would have been the wiser....shallow? WHAT? haha

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Nice tribute to JD and respect for the desires of the girls. As always written in smooth metaphors that blissfully engage the page.

[Frieda P]

Thanks John, jazz'd you enjoyed the eye candy.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

No I did not! Cheeky mare!

[Frieda P]

Ha you Scotsmen are so stuffy!!

[Vidya Bacchus]

Oh my firstly the picture got me all hot and bothered and the words finished me off.Nice ,sexy,fun one chica =-O

[Frieda P]

Mission accomplished! Ha, I had a different pic there, then I found that hunka. haha

[Vidya Bacchus]

That hunka burning love was purrrrfect for your sizzling lines.

[Frieda P]

I was going to say that, you beat me to it pazzo. ;)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Hahaha great minds and all that jazz.Although in this case it might be perverted minds lol

[Frieda P]

Exactly....I'd say you only live once, but I hate that saying lol

[Vidya Bacchus]

Haha yes but it is true :)

[Frieda P]

Seriously, if I hear yolo one more time, I'm gonna flip. ;)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Haha you said it first and really how many times can you flip lol

[Frieda P]

Why do you think I spend so much time on the ceiling? haha

[Vidya Bacchus]

Hahahaha oh now I get it I thought you thought you were a chandelier :)

[Frieda P]

O_O oooh shiny stuff, ha ha don't get me started, I'm working on minimal sleep :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Lol....well more coffee chica the cure for all that ails us :)