Rainy days ..

Rainy days ..

A Poem by the_stoic
"

no day can be as romantic as a rainy day ..

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Oh! how the rainy days caress

dripping the panes in silver, with finesse.
I curl up in Her theme
as I swim the deep waters of mine dream.
Holding my endearing little angel and getting drenched
a moment to cherish, deeply entrenched..


© 2010 the_stoic


Author's Note

the_stoic
those who are blessed to be with their Love in this season very well know what it feels like .. i was inspired by craig's "Umbrella man"

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yes, dear, this is a little gem. I also think there is nothing so romantic. If ever you offer a woman shelter from the rain- be it in your arms or under your umbrella, be prepared.... it happened to me once and I love that man still.... many many years later :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


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idk if this is about a father and his little girl, or a man and his wife. but it is very sweet. good short write stoic

Posted 9 Years Ago


ooooohh write..quite wet and drenched thought..:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a good poem. I really like this a lot. I think this was a romantic poem. So you did a nice job on this. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very romantic A blessed thought

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

really great

Posted 10 Years Ago


yes, dear, this is a little gem. I also think there is nothing so romantic. If ever you offer a woman shelter from the rain- be it in your arms or under your umbrella, be prepared.... it happened to me once and I love that man still.... many many years later :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Funny how a love makes such a difference in our perceptions...makes walking in the rain a romantic...memorable event instead of just getting soggy wet...

I hear you brother... missing her is a b***h...

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

My god….
Dear stoic….
Your lines touch the delicate side of reader’s mind…..
Wonderful….
Here it is raining in kerala…
wow....!!!!!!!!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Absolutely true; rain blossoms beautiful romance. Coming to think of it, now I understand why all romantic Hindi songs are shot in the rain lol.
Loving the picture - I felt it enhanced the presentation.
Well done.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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This is a wonderful and amazing write.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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