If Walls Could Talk

If Walls Could Talk

A Chapter by Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)
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For the ones separated by space

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If walls could talk, these words you'll hear
'I love you so much, forever, my dear
We shall not cease, we shall not fear
We shall not give each heart a tear'

Oh, if walls could talk, we won't be hurt
If only we're not this oceans apart


© 2015 Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)


Author's Note

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)
An entry to a challenge to make a poem with the phrase "If Walls Could Talk".



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I like the rythme in this piece.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

9 Years Ago

Thanks a lot.
and they would speak of love across the miles...a nice poem to read on valentines day, since my girlfriend is three states away. not oceans, but still...

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

9 Years Ago

Thank you, Sir.
Great job again! Very beautiful write, great flow and sweet message, thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

9 Years Ago

Thank you, James.

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Added on February 15, 2015
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Tags: walls, space, oceans, love, friendship, connection


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Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)
Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

Philippines



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Hello! I am Dhaye, a public secondary school teacher, a passionate artist "married" to her dream. I write in different perspectives. So please know NOT all my works are about me. .. more..

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