Flawless

I know I am flawed, but I love you so much
And I see you perfect for me to fill my gaps,
My imperfection needs you, my coat is your touch
In your arms is where I need to collapse

Heaven is my place when I am with you
My flaws are like necklace to my subtle skin
But to you it's okay, seems you wear my shoe
Your love makes me flawless and perfect within.

Author's Note

Perfect love

Reviews

[W R Stowe]

Love is so amazing it compliments each other I am strong where she is weak and she is strong where I am weak.None of us are perfect but we are perfect for each other nicely penned Dhaye

Bill

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thank you, Bill.

[W R Stowe]

your welcome Dhaye

[Lydia Shutter]

Yes, love can do that....make flaws seem like the perfect accouterments! Intensely loving and romantic words. So lovely. lydi**

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Lydi.

[Michael (Letters and Li..]

Just beautiful, Dhaye! I can really relate to this. You expressed it so well. Every poem I read of yours just keeps getting better and better. I love your writing!

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Michael.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i need you to complement my flaws...your love makes me flawless...what a great idea...

i like the risks the speaker takes in this this piece...if only everyone could have that someone to fill in the gaps.

nicely expressed
jacob

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thank you, sir

[Eddie Davis]

A nice little poem, Love does indeed make flaws fade away.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Eddie.