Love's Debut

an entry

There is one thing you must decide-

Do not deny what you now feel

Delay your plans, forget your pride

Don’t push with doubt, just show what’s real

On love’s debut, you cannot hide.

Author's Note

For Take 5 Challenge: Using words decide, deny, delay, doubt, and debut in 5 lines

Reviews

[Michael (Letters and Li..]

Wow, Dhaye! This is just amazing. A real masterpiece, if you ask me. Short and concise but so full of depth! And a beautiful message. I love it! It's just perfect. It's going straight in my library. I'm so sorry you haven't heard from me in a while but ive been away. But this was a beautiful piece to come back to.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thank you so much, Michael.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

you did a really good job with this challenge...it flows nicely and all the words fit in very well.

jacob

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks a lot for spending your time to my work, sir.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks a lot for spending your time to my work, sir.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

You can try to run from love but it will always catch you. Nice one.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thank you, Sir!

[Eddie Davis]

It's amazing how you did that, good job, it weaves a good poem.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Eddie.