I Miss My Stalker!!!!!!!!

Its been almost three years since you were there, and I still remember.

I can't think of you,

not the way you think of me,

and everything you do

stops my calmed heart beat.

Honey, can you feel the heat?

Thats just blood, running from the wrists

you want to slit.

Shut up. There is nothing but this.

There is a whole world after this,

if I can bear to walk away,

and crush your smiling face,

but darling, I don't owe you anything.

you held a broken heart in your hands,

but little by little I stole it back.

Do you miss me?

Too bad. I don't care.

No order can restrain you,

I still feel your fingers under my hair.

Your hands were warm around my neck,

but your strangle hold wasn't worth it.

And.... if you're wondering, I'm not coming back.

Don't you dare to miss me, my final heart attack.

Reviews

[TBPopper]

Wow, this is actually pretty good. No disrespect, of course, you just look sort of young so I came in with the attitude of 'Eh, we'll see...'

Excellent title, really drew me right to this one as I'm browsing your work. I liked it a lot. The emotion's just right. Really sells 'crazy person' straight away.

Oh, and good for you for flat out praising Jesus in your profile. Always glad to see that.

[JanuaryDreamer♥]

wow, really great poem with an awesome title! i gotta be honest, when i read the title in my RR, i thought ":O she misses me?! :D" lmfao jkjk, but i had to laugh at that thought....but besides that, good job! you always make my day with ur poems (: even if the poems are as serious as this one is, they always seem to brighten my day in some way! the last part really got to me and was really good.

[Amanda Dawn Sanderson-G..]

This was quite interesting, yet a little creepy.

[Calypso]

Oh wow. I'm not sure if I should laugh or not. Good write though.

[These Haunted Hallways]

Ooo, very good! Creepy and powerful at the same time. I agree with the others as well. Nice job! :)

M.

[Moflo]

This was such an interesting concept, I must say...very unique. It was written nicely with a great, strong flow and a story that kept the reader hooked. Great job.

[OtherWorldWoman]

This poem has attitude and good emotion. I really enjoyed the way you worded the piece, it is a different spin on this concept and I really enjoy when it isnt the same old stuff. I saw on your profile that you also write songs. I do too. I am new at it, but music is very important to me and I hope to make something of it one day. Do you ever post any of your songs on here?

[Zoe Jay]

This poem has all of the breathy, tense anxiety and confusion which both parties inevitably experience in an obsessive-relationship situation. It swings from me-to-you, and from anger and defiance to a sort of delicacy, almost an appreciation of the other person, so there is a sort of empathy in this poem, alongside an earthy understanding of how unhealthy the obsessive person actually is. Unhealthy, even damaging, relationships are actually harder to escape from than normal, balanced relationships, and they often stay with us a lot longer as well. I particularly like "no order can restrain you", because apart from the obvious reference to a restraining order, this could also be read as a reference to the disorder / confusion of the person's psyche, someone who cannot be restrained by rationale. Very good write!

[PrincessZeldaWannabe]

Lovely and dark yet soft! Great job!

[Nothing Personal]

Interesting. Felt the venom and deep sarcasm in this piece. Really good write...

[Anna]

Well I believe if you maybe stopped answering the questions in this poem that it will sound better. Also think of something that has happened to you that you can relate to and then think about it for a while and write what has come to your mind and heart.