Shallimar and Syber Haiku

For your Shallimar Rose and Syber Rose

Two roses blooming

in poetic verse make a

beautiful garden

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Two beautiful blooms indeed.

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Dale

[Rita L. Sev]

The two Roses - lovely! This could accurately be considered a haiku. :)

[Jack...]

Darn if you aren't right Rita. I got a little ahead of myself. Thanks so much

[Jack...]

I changed it to Haiku Rita. Thanks.

[redflutterby]

A senryu that smells so sweet!! Our two Roses....both lovely writers!! ;-)

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Red

[SyberRose]

Thank you Jack for that lovely and unique senryu including my new friend ShallimarRose and myself...how sweet of you.
Very creative...:)

[Jack...]

You are very welcome my wonderful friend.

[shallimarRose]

Awww, Jack this is precious thank you... I have only recently met Syber Rose. What a sweet thing to post.. I love it .. Great Senryu...

xoxo Rose

[Jack...]

You are very welcome my friend.

[ShelleyA]

Hi Jack. A beautiful write and presentation for two lovely poetesses. Heartfelt. A well crafted Senryu. Perfect 5/7/5 syllabic form. Good imagery, flow and tone. Lovely depth of feeling; you express your feelings about these "Roses" lovingly in this poem. Your friendship shines in this piece. Good word choice. Nice alliteration, assonance and consonance. Well penned and a much enjoyed read. Write on!

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much Shelley. I appreciate you always stopping by to read my work.

[ShelleyA]

You're very welcome and my pleasure, Jack. Have a great day!

[Zahra]

Beautiful, true indeed for these two amazing poets. Really nice jack...

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Zahra

[Zahra]

You're welcome my friend :)