my shopping list while pregnant

another funny poem i created a second version of this poem let me know what you think do you like the first version or second better

first version

Oh Goody,

Oh joy,

I found out i was pregnant,

And now this is my shopping list,

All i want is,

Goodies,

Sweets ,

Cracker Jacks,

Apple pie,

Chocolate pudding,

Snickers ice cream ,

Caramel apples,

Strawberries pie,

Sugary drinks,

Now that's my shopping list

second version

my shopping list while pregnant

oh goody,

oh my,

just found out i was expecting,

and now i am having lots of cravings,

all i want is,

goodies,

sweets,

cracker jacks,

apple pie,

chocolate pudding,

snickers,

icecream,

caramel apples,

sugary drinks,

and of course salad,

healthy food as well,

hats the end of this shopping list

Author's Note

tell me what you think
no rude comments

Reviews

[samparks,sam]

nice feeling after read it.