Thank You

A great poem for my dearest parents and whom I treated as my parents(my aunts and uncles). A big THANK YOU for all. Stay STRONG and may GOD BLESS you all. :)

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Thank You

I’m just a child with big dreams.

You’ve made me strong and at the same time happy.

I hear your laughs then I ran to you

And you hugged me like no one ever hugged me before.

I never knew you treat me very special

But then I forgot to say Thank You.

 

You’ve been my inspiration since I started living.

And even now, I never lose that track of thinking.

Seeing you every day,

Always makes me want to stay.

I always cry when you leave me at school.

It’s like I’m bound to be always with you.

You hugged me tight till I fall asleep

And yet, I forgot to say Thank You.

 

You work abroad for our own good

And you’re not here to see what I made.

Whenever it’s Sunday and we’re at the Church,

I always pray that we are stronger and safe.

I know God would listen to my prayer.

But still something was unsaid.

Thank You was still ahead.

 

I know I’m still young

And like many things in life.

I know you’ll do anything for me to have it

And yet something was still unsaid.

I grew up not so perfect

And still, you loved me like I’m whole.

 

So, now, as I wrote down this poem,

You’re deep inside in my heart

Being my inspiration as I start.

I knew it was hard to say,

So I wrote it for it’s easier to say

And express my feelings that I haven’t said.

As I finish this wonderful gift,

A gift that only a daughter can give,

I know this is my chance.

THANK YOU MOM and DAD

For loving me and being your inspiration.

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Author's Note

please tell me what to change and what to correct. thanks

jhed:)
"ALWAYS SMILE:)"

Reviews

[rielovella]

Wow! very nice poem of yours... :)

[Abd-afeez]

its so emotional, with its simplicity i can see a strong emotional voice within. good job. an interesting read no doubt.