Use her??

Sorry it's quite short

Chris's POV.

I went home and rummaged for the year book. Found it. I wanted to see this girl. "Stephanie. Where are you? Here we goo. The S page. Stephanie!  There we go.. Stephanie... SMITH!!!???? WHAT? NO.. IT CAN'T BE!!! IS THIS THE RIGHT STEPHANIE? THE STEPHANIE THAT I TALKED TO?? NO.. NO ...NO!!!!!" i thought.

i went downstairs to  find my parents, reading the newspaper.

" MUM. DAD!  Guess what? I met this totally nice girl but guess what?? SHE'S A SMITH!!" i said all in one breath.

"Honey. Now you know you can't like a --" mum began.

"Wait a minute,honey" said dad.

"So tell me about this girl, Chris." he said.

" Um, she's hot and she's a Smith. I can't believe it! She lied to me!"

" I have an idea "  dad said.

" What?" i said, confused.

" You pretend to like her. Get close to her. And just when you get her on the spot..you BREAK HER HEART. " explained dad.

"I like it. " i replied, interested.

"Now Chris. This is a difficult job. Remember this : YOU CANNOT FALL IN LOVE WITH THIS GIRL." my dad noted in a VERY serious voice

"Chillax dad. I'll do it but what's in it for me?" I questioned, hoping to get something good.

"Double of an allowance and extended curfew" mum said.

" It's a done deal." I said, My smile widened.

 

STEPHS POV.

 Walking home i was confused. I hate him for not telling me who he was but deep down inside, there was something about that made me feel... noticed. I got home and saw my parents watching T.V.

"Hey Mum. Dad." i said, exhausted.

"Hello sweetheart. How was your day?" mum asked. and by this, she meant  any one notice you?

"Sucked." i said.

" Oh no. How about i make some hot chocolate for you" she said. She always knew how to make me feel better.

"No it's ok." i said.

I headed up for my room. I put my earphones on and listened to my iPod.

 

Next day at school...

 

I went to Gym. I HATE GYM. I suck at it. I can't play any sports at all.

" Smith!" called Coach Anderson.

" Yes?" i asked.

" You're failing Gym. If you can't get a free throw in basketball, you can kiss your A goodbye." she explained.

This was horrible. I didn't know what to do. But i knew who could help me. i know he's a Sparrow but i really want that A..

to be continued...

Author's Note

ignore grammar and spelling

Reviews

[TheMizFit]

Sparrows are jerks. xD Haha. Oh well, since I've been on about it for 3 chapters already, I will stop here. I just agree with SM Garcia. Keep up the good work and remember, there's always room for improvements. :)

[M Garcia]

I don't want to sound over critical, but you really need to stretch out the chapters, make them longer. Adding more dialogue and descriptions will help witht his. I know how hard it is, I used to have the same problem. Being on here will help with that.