A Chapter by dramarama123

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  Chris's POV

Wow..i dont even remember what i did.. I can't believe this. It's like a nightmare.. Or a dream. I swear, ever since i met Steph, i've felt different. Maybe that why i had the urge to do it. But, i feel i've let Brittany down for a car... But there's no turning back.. I'll just have to see what happens on Saturday night

[A/N: It's Friday]

Stephs's POV

OH MY GOD. OH MY GOD. OH...MY....GOD.... I CAN'T BELIEVE IT. AND I SAID YES! I MEAN, WHAT WAS I THINKING? THIS GUY IS MAKING ME FEEL WORSE EVERYTIME I SEE HIM. But...for some reason...i'm GLAD i said yes! i don't know why  but i just think it's a new change for me... WHAT AM I THINKING...ARGH!! Then i started to think about what happened today


"3:59pm," I thought." Should i knock now? Am i too early? Is he still at home?Will his parents be mad? Only time will tell..."


" Oh hello sweetie," Mrs. Sparrow said, opening the door " Come on in!"

I walked inside. Doesn't she know that..oh, i dont know..HER ENEMY'S DAUGHTER IS IN HER HOUSE??!!! i guess not...

"How's your family? Chris has told me all about you." she smiled but it didnt seem real.. This was getting weirder by the second.

" Umm, where's Chris?" i asked awkwardly.

" Oh, he's in his room. Second door on the left" she said, pointing to the stairs.

" Thanks"

I walked up the stairs.. The house was HUGE!!!

I came across his room and knocked.

" Come in!" i heard his voice on the other side of the door.

I opened the door and saw Chris, reading....a book.... OK...AM I GOING CRAZY?/

" Are you reading?" i asked.. 

" Yeh. I like reading some books..Got a problem?" he said, offended

"No,of course not. I actually think it's really cool. i mean you're MVP but at the same time, just a regular guy."

" OK...."

" Should we go out and play basketball?" i asked, desperate to get it over with.

" Sure.." he said, walking behind me out the door.

We went to his backyard and there was a tennis court, a basketball hoop, a swimming pool, and a shed full of equipments.

I found a ball and tried to shoot. Missed. I tried again. Missed.

"No wonder you're failing.You're doing it all wrong." Chris commented

I tried again but before i shot, Chris took my hand and adjusted it. He loosened my wrist and held the ball high and shot. It got in. I turned around and smiled


" I AM here to teach you,right??" he said.

" Good point." i answered.

We kept practicing and i was getting better. At about 5:00pm, we were really tired. The sun was setting and we were just lying down, staring at the clouds.

" Hey, Steph?" Chris said, in a hesitant way.

" Yeh?" i asked

" Will you....go out with me??" he asked quickly.

I couldn't believe it. He was asking me? A nobody? What should i say? What about Brittany? Should i say yes? 

" Um.....yes...i guess" i replied, hoping that it was the best answer.

He smiled a big smiled. He looked cute. 

" Oh and...Brittany doesnt know about this so can we keep it on the DL?" he said sheepishly

" Ok. Tomorrow. Pick me up at my house at 7:00pm." i said, feeling bad for Brittany for some reason

 " OK." he said.

" OH SHOOT!! IT'S 5:30!!! i'm late. i Gotta go..i'll see you soon. BYE!!" i said before grabbing my bag and leaving.

" Bye..." Chris said,faintly...

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You've a bit more description here, but I'd still add to it. Having a chapter about why their families hate each other would probably be a neat thing.

Posted 9 Years Ago

This is a good concept but I agree with Tala. The way you wrote is very blunt. You should try putting more details in this and describe the characters more.

Posted 10 Years Ago

The way you've written this is REALLY annoying, its all blunt and obvious, You havent explained why they hate each other or wy they'd be going to court or whatever. In real life steph would be WAY more suspicious about chris's family liking her. In this your sort of shoving facts in peoples faces, like that she's not noticed or that he's a popular. People dont introduce themselves the way you've had them meet. I like the storyline but it's not original so basically theres nothing good about this, at all. Sorry to be so harsh but its true.

Posted 10 Years Ago

Good storyline, but I thought your writing was dreadful.
It seemed like a hyper 8 year old took a hold of an AIM.
Work on actually WRITING and this could turn out pretty good.

Posted 11 Years Ago went perfectly well till here....I loved the closing lines the most....
They are simply so beautiful and deep!

Posted 11 Years Ago

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