Never Vindicated

Never Vindicated

A Poem by justjenn_2u

He asks her if she is feeling rambunctious.

 

She is thinking peaceful thoughts until he stirs her shamed mind.

 

She stares into the aqua sky contemplating the other betrayals he may find.

 

He feels so insecure that he could once again lose her to the lost ones.

 

He wonders if there will be a repeated night where she didn't come home to her sons.

 

She is fighting the demons clinging within.

 

He remembers the times of her living in her branded sin.

 

She is hearing the taunting voices scream.

 

She wishes her mistakes were just a horrid dream.

 

She prays that the urge will be lifted.

 

Into her barrier, she has slowly drifted.

 

 

© 2008 justjenn_2u


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We all have inner demons that, whisper into our ears, and make some paths more appealing then others at times. Be these demons of outside experience or inside turmoil. But like all things, we are yin and yang, each demon has and angel beside it, fighting for you and what is good. It becomes a choice, that one fills with will power. Sometimes that will power needs chocolate or a helping hand of a friend to become strong enought to conquer those demons.
Good poem.. A little picture into your soul. :)
May the winds of life, always give strength to your angels, as you walk along.

Posted 16 Years Ago


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Simply wonderful writing. I enjoyed this.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

We all have inner demons that, whisper into our ears, and make some paths more appealing then others at times. Be these demons of outside experience or inside turmoil. But like all things, we are yin and yang, each demon has and angel beside it, fighting for you and what is good. It becomes a choice, that one fills with will power. Sometimes that will power needs chocolate or a helping hand of a friend to become strong enought to conquer those demons.
Good poem.. A little picture into your soul. :)
May the winds of life, always give strength to your angels, as you walk along.

Posted 16 Years Ago


4 of 4 people found this review constructive.

well done. We all have those demons that haunt us.

Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Yay! You did one in third person! I like it.

Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.


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I write from my heart. I follow my instinct. I live impulsively. I never feel like my feet are firmly grounded as I am a free spirit. I am a very intuitive person, sometimes to the point it hurts .. more..

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