Why..?

Why..?

A Chapter by Kay

Why

Why does this happen

Things change drastically in life

But Why

I know its for the better

But there's still tears in my eyes

I feel like I'm sufficating because is coming so fast

Why

Why does this happen

I know its for the better

But as it nears, its lies become real

Why

I feel a pain in my heart

Like I am dying

But I might as well be

With all the things I'm leaving behind

Why

 



© 2015 Kay


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This is a very deep, emotional poem, including many questions I feel we all ask at one time or another.

One comment of criticism: "dieing" should be "dying".

Nice work!

- Brittney

Posted 8 Years Ago


Kay

8 Years Ago

Thank You! Your criticism helps a lot
613

8 Years Ago

You're welcome. I look forward to reading more from you!
This is so sad. Brought a tear to my eyes. Great poem

Posted 10 Years Ago


Kay

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much :)
Is this about you moving?

Posted 10 Years Ago


Izabe143

8 Years Ago

Uh mine was crappy remember
Kay

8 Years Ago

Well it wasn't crappy at first
Izabe143

8 Years Ago

At first…it's always the beginning you love the most

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