Thomas.

A study of me.

Tommy was bold, 

Tommy was cute,

Tommy was fine,

Tommy played flute.

Gay was Tommy,

Sexy was Tommy,

Men he had Tommy,

Afraid he wasn't Tommy.

Reviews

[reflectingus]

I really enjoyed that little contrast you had, as if the first stanza described childhood Tommy, and the second one described the grown up Tommy. And also the way you described the childhood innocence, and then a little bit of adult naughtiness, and also your happiness and high self-esteem, and this shows how important it is to love oneself. I love this succinct write, and yet there is great meaning behind it. I enjoyed reading.

[Brandon S. Whitten]

Oh Tommy, as always...splendid! xx

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

A playful look of you as artist. Nicely done.

[freelancejouster]

sort of a he does this, he gets put into this box kind of thing. very interesting.

[Lowesy]

running out of superlatives for your work, congrats

[Fragilebrokendreams]

Very nice, explaining yourself in such simple words that have such big meaning. I love it!

[Lily Mae]

Tommy is all these things...whole, happy and void of fear.. :) xo

[TKBickel]

Hey I play clarinet. We could flutter a tune together.
Great poem, love they layout and, again, the way you use a short amount of words for a huge impact.

[eatmills]

Nice job Tommy. Simplistic but says a lot about Tommy. I liked the self-acceptance you've presented, I wish more people were comfortable with who they are.

[Arabdha]

Good job !