Thomas.

A study of me.

Tommy was bold, 

Tommy was cute,

Tommy was fine,

Tommy played flute.

Gay was Tommy,

Sexy was Tommy,

Men he had Tommy,

Afraid he wasn't Tommy.

Reviews

[reflectingus]

I really enjoyed that little contrast you had, as if the first stanza described childhood Tommy, and the second one described the grown up Tommy. And also the way you described the childhood innocence, and then a little bit of adult naughtiness, and also your happiness and high self-esteem, and this shows how important it is to love oneself. I love this succinct write, and yet there is great meaning behind it. I enjoyed reading.

[Kenneth The Poet]

Love it...like a well-done romantic story.

[Jazique]

Owe, these kind of made me smile at the end. I the stanza of how you had Tommy was this and this was Tommy owe wonderful. I agree with Dominic you're a genius. Simple short creative, and entertaining. Well done

[Crystal Marie Dreier]

This is beautiful!!

[Pencrafter]

The poem is well-written and easy to read. Unfortunately it's also easy to understand. My personal preference is to avoid such subjects, as well as those featuring excessive violence and profanity. That's my opinion and choice.

[Octob3r Star]

Tommy sounds kinda s****y. :) Cheers

[Who Cares]

You are a poetical God, Your word play is beyond imaginable.. This was so simple yet sooooo powerful and amazing. I LOVE IT, great job my friend. :D

[Priscilla Sayers]

Tommy, is and always will be, TOMMY!
I love Tommy.
Keep writing, every word soaks into this mind with eagerness to learn.

[Thea]

Such a clever piece of work...Overflowing with creativity! Great work!
:)))

[Dayran]

Where Tommy didn't have the right role model, he could have still loved himself as a man worthy of love. Nice write!

[SuicidePact.]

I liked this, very creative.