Silver

just a short thing but i quite like it. hope you do too :)

Silver rings

Silver light

Silver love

And silver fright.

You shot me down

And you were right,

For by silver moon

I ran the night. 

Reviews

[TheSweet]

At first I read this like 'this is pretty cool, perhaps there could be more'. But then I read it a second time, thinking 'It's fine how it is'. I think it flows well, it leaves enough to the imagination - and it's very simple, but pleasing to read :) Thanks for sharing!

[Danielle]

Very nice!

[forevermore1218]

this is truely awesome. You reminded me of a place in my heart that I escape to when I am stuck. It shows me warmth and comfort though it may not seem the brightest place a person could be. you portrayed that place so beautifully it makes me lighten up in the middle of the night.

Love your work :)

[Olive Belikov]

aww thank you so much, i appreciate it greatly :D

[kayla]

This is really good(:

[victoria]

an almost cold colour with hidden depths as you so beautifully show here