My Rose

A rose
awaiting bloom
Though no light
to help it grow.
For the rose
in utter darkness
Anxiously waiting
to let its pedals show.
Its potential
quiet beautiful
Its layers
beyond grand.
But stuck
stuck waiting
Cold and lonely
feeling damned.

Reviews

[Planet x]

I love it
Hope you found the light by now
Hope the Rose had bloomed

[Relic]

That roe could be a metaphor for the heart that resides inside a lot of people. Cold and waiting to bloom. Beautiful poem.

[Lauren Nicks]

Thank you so much! Glad you enjoyed it!

[JMaster1]

I love your style , this is probably a beautiful Rose
Same like the soul , we needs our light to grow up

[Lauren Nicks]

Thank you! You're sweet :)

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Cold and lonely
feeling damned....

Good to see the Rose anxiously waiting to let its pedals show. Nice poem :)

[Lauren Nicks]

Thank you! I appreciate that! :)

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Welcome! Pleasure reading that! :)