Dirty

Dirty

A Poem by Larry Dyson

Do you remember...?

 

 without anger...

 

can you remember a love devoid of emotional pitfalls...

 

 would the feelings grow ...?

 

estranged from the soil ...

 

 dirty dirty soil....

 

can love grow and bloom ...

 

...without the dirty soil?

© 2012 Larry Dyson


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Very thought provoking and felt. Excellent work.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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within the dirt is where we grow...roots...and watered with LOVE

Beautiful and thought provoking piece Laury

Posted 7 Years Ago


Or the fragility that death places on it...
over and through unblessed ground
could it be washed clean by the tears we both tasted
as they stung the lips
unspoken words?
Only the soil shall truly know
only roots can nurture now...


Sometimes have to have the dirt to scrub it clean...a fertilser, so to speak....who knows....reached me Laury, love xoxo

Posted 7 Years Ago


or sowed as it is so?

Posted 7 Years Ago


A very interesting question. What could the answer be? Nothing is all good or is anything all bad. Excellent poem.

Posted 7 Years Ago


its a metaphor for life . A messy business , the dirty soil is where the growth is.

Posted 7 Years Ago


yes...but you have to tether the anger at the healing post

Posted 7 Years Ago


YES ............

J.

Posted 7 Years Ago


The richness of the earth does feed us all from tender sprouts to the fullness of the bloom. Loved your poem

Posted 7 Years Ago


how can we call dirt dirty? kind of odd? thought provoking perception....it was a pleasure to read you.

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Larry Dyson
Larry Dyson

Tomball /Magnolia, TX



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WARNING!!--- my writing approaches Mature most of the time, read with caution if you are concerned ,or so WC thinks? - I'm a retired southern woods walker..who writes and lives modestly..I love n.. more..

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