The rains

A paring up poetry work by Arshia and I.

THE RAIN

Patter patter softly down,

soak into the hot dry ground

Like tears the clouds do softly cry,

So the plants do never die!
As the first drops land upon my skin,

Am moved, like I’ve never been!

travelling deep inside

they suddenly burst,

quenching the soul’s persistent thirst!
Respite from the scorching heat,

the eyes get a splendid treat.

Awaited by each river and every pond,

It blissfully fills them of their loss!
Let go of that umbrella

and also all the pains,

With open arms & a grateful heart,

Let’s welcome the ‘Rains’!! :) :)

 

 

 

9th place

Aug 8, 2015

 

• Water Poetry
• The rains

2nd place

Sep 30, 2015

• Pairing Up Poetry!
• The rains 

Author's Note

Collaboration with Arshia.

Reviews

[Warren Daniel II]

I really enjoyed this poem so much, just reading the impact that the drops of rain have which we take for granted. I liked the rhyme scheme these were my favorite lines " Am moved, like I’ve never been!
travelling deep inside
they suddenly burst,
quenching the soul’s persistent thirst!"

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Thank you for your kind review!

[Roshan Nair]

Great write and all the better since its a collab. you've captured some wonderful imagery here..really enjoyed reading it :) cheers

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Thanks!

[Sami Khalil]

"the eyes get a splendid treat.
Awaited by each river and every pond,
It blissfully fills them of their loss!"

A good collaboration between the two of you. I enjoyed it tremendously...:).............

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Thank you very much!!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)....................

[Valkyrie Warrior]

:D!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Sami Khalil]

:)...........................

[Marie]

I do enjoy the rain too, especially when it breaks the heat we get in Texas.

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Thank you for reviewing!

[Jamestown]

Fantastic write, love the flow and wording! Can't stand the rain, but this piece
made me enjoy it, great job! Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Thank you very much!!