strange enough

 

 

 

 

Strange enough

By Ivonne L.

 

Being with you is like looking into a stranger's face complete. I can't say nothing to you but impress or hide from you.

Even thou we were one before ever since you have been a stranger to me. Yet strange enough I miss you, and I want you back.

It's such a shame that I lost you for someone who just wasn't worth it. Yet strange enough I shouldn't think twice. It’s bad luck, so I should just move on and let you be.

Strange enough I'd would rather have those precious moments we had. Then never have had you at all, so I say good bye to you and farewell.

 

Reviews

[CLUTZ]

i like it, u just have a few spelling errors. very nice

[Krazy On The Outside]

Amazing job!
I loved it!

[Taylor H]

great job

[Helena]

Oh the heartache of moving on when your mind tells you its
time and your heart is yearning for what was.

Thank you for submitting this lovely poem to my "A Chance to
Shine Contest"~! ~ Helena

[Bhavya Kaushik]

This is genuinely a great piece of writing, so heartfelt and strong!
I really loved it :)

[Brianna Brie]

even thou we were one before ever since you've been a stranger to me.yet strange enough I miss you,and i want you back.

I like your style. Nice work...thanks for entering the Missing Him, Missing Her contest.

[We are young.]

This was very cool, I liked it a lot. The only thing I would change is though not tho