A magical World

A magical World

A Poem by Kimberly "Melody" Carney

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Under the oak tree, where my mind glides far from me.

I envision a world, pure of heart but not mistake free.

I see all the colors magnificently swirl and blend.

It beckons me to let go of this world I live in.

 

I gesture a nod of understanding and grace.

I cannot stay, in this wonderfully crafted place.

I must travel home through my minds worn roads.

Open my eyes, to see the beauty my world holds.

 

I see the birds as they fly in graceful silhouettes

They are free of burdens, they have no regrets.

The flowers bloom magically, without being told.

Within my surroundings, I see the wisdom it holds.

 

I shall bloom like the flower, exposing beauty within.

Fly like the bird, carefree not fearing a tail spin.

Our world holds so much wonder and magic inside.

My new dream is of one, where we are treating it with pride.

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© 2012 Kimberly "Melody" Carney


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Melody,you are magical craft person of a fabulous place in our world.
Your melodious flow of words arrested my power of movement for sometime.
You are a great angel belonging to our world who can create so much wonder and magic in this mundane place.
Congratulations!!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kimberly "Melody" Carney

11 Years Ago

I am humbled...



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fabulous and Beautiful!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow, what a beautiful image of nature you've shown us ! Also, admirable the message you hold in the very last verse. Technically speaking I enjoyed the use of quatrains, it's very cool. Great job =D

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love the beauty in this piece. I actually smelt dews on green grass

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Relaxing, true and eye-opening. Beautiful!


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Melody,you are magical craft person of a fabulous place in our world.
Your melodious flow of words arrested my power of movement for sometime.
You are a great angel belonging to our world who can create so much wonder and magic in this mundane place.
Congratulations!!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kimberly "Melody" Carney

11 Years Ago

I am humbled...
Once again, a beautiful poem! I agree that we ought to really look at our own world and find beauty and happiness in it, because it is a wonderful, exquisite place!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Awesome poem!!!! I need to reflect on all the beauty within this world instead of wishing I lived in a magical land like you see in movies! Thanks for pointing out the beauty in this world!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very pretty. I can see this place in my head; a vibrant picture painted by your words. Great work.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

such beautiful place.. the pictures goes well with it!! I would love to live in a place like this

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love the imagery in this poem as well as the pictures that go with it. I like how it describes a wonderful place that exists.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Kimberly "Melody" Carney
Kimberly "Melody" Carney

Denver, CO



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