Compartment 114
Compartment 114
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SWICK: Torrent of Grace VOL 4

SWICK: Torrent of Grace VOL 4

A Poem by Nicaushio Yamaki

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1) Tricrown Escypse

Dine many to the other rage of sorrow blisters, to a scrod of the war to the end, as they wait for the moment striking comes to take hold of thy souls, living such as an ungraceful being.

In the day of spoken of your life, thy calling has fallen to dusk, many of your souls are destroyed to the mourning of the sounds, like failure has never be to thy never it will be stopped.

Crying to the sin of thy own, as he bows to his knees crying for his life, for ones deliverance. Inside of him lies with deceit powerless against a fool.

Turning to mist of dust, not one with never ending as the time flows by death to the scorching meadows, as death and agony take hold of thy gasp, from where the sacrificer swarms through the terrorist night.

Glooming days of tragedy closes on the living, I am the one who foreskins, this life of dreading, through the tones of the winds flows alone with words, the rise of the storm reigns with pride.

How can u exist in this world of sin, why trust your life when terror strikes you.

Many cries of falling souls forgotten in dismay weeping endless voices traps all that consumes, as the darken rise roaming through thy souls torturing depts. As you u stay among the wicked grace.

2) Crown of goddess

To a last taste of power has never had a chosen ruler, as thou clouds glide across the scenes of light, reach holiness across the hopeless, want you join thy ruler make thy hold become one over all.

As the crown of light shines for its righteous, not one remained people of the world arise thou voices for a becoming kingdom ruler, taking thy dreams and sorrows of dismay to the light of justice, as darkness flees more to come unto all remains, to joy among the flashing light.

Joy, peace of all eternal last above, thy wicked darken shadows of sin, flees away as the fowling terracing pain, when all has restored things shall no longer be that never was.

To a hold a new is comer, as thy wielder glides his power across the clouds, as all has hoped to the restless, gathering people of salvation, darkness is no more.

The sorrow of many shall no more be, at the power shows strength shall abide to his land…Glory to he that rules the land.

Sudden darkness arouses with rage to crush thy helpless as atonement clashes among thy living the world of the living has fallen, left on hope for thy goddess of light.

3) Fatal trust

At the sound of thy voice, the wicked mist is yet untold

When the moment has struck,

The silence becomes immortal as struggles began to fade to dusk

As though thy moment, true fatal shall be fallen

Graceful of freely doe

Runs to life to beyond, the gates of joy

Curse ye are the one

Who forever trapped me in blasphemy?

Every closer it gets

To more of the guilty soul

During inside me lays revenge, to thy wicked guilt

For thou soul

This time I shall never forsake thou punishment, for thou shall never be left unpunished…..

No matter where u goes thy guilty shall follow

Though the ages of souls lies a loss of faith

As thy soul fades, the clouds consume thee

When the dusk falls, shadow of guilt becomes

Revealing, through the ashes of darken

As u reap your sins, ye though they seer lies

Among you.

4) Cradle of innocent blood

(Intro)

Thy calling voice arises.

While u sleeps in ashes of blood

Ever so risen

How many vows have been told?

As it becomes bitter

More icy withering flowers

Fading into the windy gust

As I walk through

Valley of winter

Closure as it gets a signed

To never make a sound

As I step through eternal shades

Cast thee unto your gust cries for Revengance

5) Starlight moon

(Instrumental)

6) The resting stream

Once more in struggle

Through the blacken

Terror

Everything shall rest, for the coming of

Aggression

Who shall be the one to rages up into the

War

They will be reclaimed

To what was

Hopeless and now remains

As the dawn

Comes ye shall rest

For tomorrow

As I plea for mourning to come

Fourth my shrouding heart

Turns to flesh of

Stone

My soul rest, for thy weaken soul has fallen, many has faded as I still remain.

Now as tomorrow comes, ye shall awaken

For the coming of new day

For joy and true

When the flower blooms

As the valley of light shines

To the darkness

Now ode thy soul shall come from the light

As a carriage to take thy soul into

The eternal home of life

As the fresh waves of the moon

Rejoice forever more

7) Day of awakening

(Instrumental)

8) Forgiveness

Dear heavenly father, forgive me of my wicked sins.

Wash me with your everlasting love,

So that I can be clean in your sight, search within my soul

And renew from me away from the things that are

Unclean and wicked in your sight and remove it from

Me….

Renew my mind oh father, make me into what you want me to be

For my soul belongs to you forever, oh Lord

I do not want to miss the rapture; I am asking you for forgiveness

Put me in focus of your holy word…

As thy souls bow for the king of kings

Woe unto those in wickedness

Like a pressuring flesh for a human gets stronger

Resist thou attempting

..Oh father forgive me…

Blaspheme the evil resist thou unholy sight

Never let the ones control you

When all has fallen only one is left

…To stand…

As thy soul walked to the green valleys

Ever so holy beyond of all

As thy hope reaches to you never forsake thy offer

For thy offer will forsake you

Oh Father of love come upon me with your loving grace

And wash me use me for your purpose, save me

Form these wicked shrouding pitching shallows

And bless are those that weeps before you

For the souls fallen in shadows

Oh God help me to remain strong in your name

Let my name glide alone the heavenly skies

Alone with your name

Oh Lord please hear my weeping, please hear my soul

Cry out to you for your love, restore my soul away form

Wicked darken sins

As thy punishment, from you as I shall reap

I shall judge myself for my sins

I will do whatever it takes o be in eternity

With you forever

Never again, shall I sin

Forever more

….Wash me

….renew me

9) Light and dark

Clashing to one with two other the one

Your choice shall lead you

For deceiving a vessel can be

Is it worth to give in to something, unrighteous?

Should a man be left unpunished?

When the striking moment occurs

The choices reveal it to blame the one who chosen

It, and turning to the wise choice, he never know

Until it strikes back

As your victory fails on you thee

For the poor choice of path

Life or death is your decision

Fading of your choice the weaker of you faith

When many times come to strike

When thou soul becomes driven to gust of leaves

Look at what you have done, with your soul

Curse of thee that chosen yet wither like

Blossoms

When I return shall I must take the hearts of purity

Spreading such light flash across the earth

Destroying wicked vessels

For righteous remains as by a folly man of

Wicked powers stand tall for battle

Defeated he falls in thy endless pit forever

As thy souls passes away to the path of their choice

He’s coming back to save us all forever

© 2010 Nicaushio Yamaki




Reviews

You are very talented!!! I can't wait to read the next chapter!!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


you are very talented keep up the good work your writing is amazing

Posted 13 Years Ago


Great album

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

another great one.... i have no criticism at all... its just simple epic.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

great album, as always. your albums really feature fantasy-type lyrics, which i think is unique as not many metal bands do that. (If you do want to find such lyrics, try DragonForce.) nice job here

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is more then amazing. It is art. The set-up of the story and the powerful words made this a great pleasure to read. I will read on. Thank you.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


A bit shorter than the rest of your volumes which is a bit better.
i like this part:Oh Lord please hear my weeping, please hear my soul
Cry out to you for your love, restore my soul away form
Wicked darken sins. btw in that part it should be like *restore my soul away FROM wicked darken sins* and should it be DARKEN because like the words in front of "spirits" should be adjectives not verbs.so make sure you only use adjectives and not verbs when your talking about things. So thats about it. Good Job!

Posted 13 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow that is intense. i like this part:
"As your victory fails on you thee
For the poor choice of path
Life or death is your decision"



Posted 13 Years Ago



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