The Raven

The Raven

A Poem by MandaBear
"

For my favorite Football team!!

"

Black bird oh black bird

How you make such loud noises

 

Black and purple moving

Trying to catch the ball

 

Working through teammates

Pushing, pushing pushing

 

Throwing the ball the goal in hand

One attempt, Two attempt, Third attempt

 

Get the ball get the points

Close to the touchdown

 

Black bird Oh Black bird 

Oh how you make me laugh

 

15,25,78,32 Hike you call

Couch yells "Come on guys lets go"

 

Fighting to score the final goal

Just making it, just reaching

 

As the whistle blows the pressures on.

It looks as though they lost.

     

But wait ! they have won!

Black and purple have done it again.

     

© 2013 MandaBear


My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

This could be a very good inspirational theme song of a football team Manda....There is a cheering message in it which will encourage the players and even the spectators....Beautifully done dear poetess.....Im walking in your poetry street and getting amazed by your large number of work.....Full ratings!!!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


MandaBear

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much!
i thought this was really about football!!!! HA HA HA I think this was a great play on words..... with the line you make loud noises.... very clever... Threw me completely for a loop!!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


The Ravens are always AWESOME!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago



Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

150 Views
3 Reviews
Rating
Added on February 4, 2011
Last Updated on June 28, 2013
Tags: bird, Ravens, black, purple, pride, Baltimore, poem, poetry


Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..


Secret Secret

A Poem by MandaBear


5:03am 5:03am

A Poem by MandaBear