Hope

'Hope' is a poem about the ups and downs of life.

Hope, life, death; what do we live for? What is your purpose? Will you forget...?

Open the door and look at what could have happened, had you changed your purpose...

Pull the door closed and carry on with life. wonder down the path of time, stopping every 'now' and 'then'...

Every time you fall, get back up. Only the best survive. We fall together... Never to return...

Author's Note

Can you solve the cryptic poem? see what you think and post it here. I don't even know what it means...

Reviews

[Bella-Marie]

Wow... this is incredibly, incredibly powerful. I ADORE it. 100 outta 100! Your rating will shoot up! This piece is indeed cryptic but the message is so clear... it is mindboggling! I can't find anything wrong with it! In fact, search "Time in a bottle" on youtube and do the muppet one - it is halarious but is just like this poem... I love the third line, it is the most powerful.
Incredible. Astonishing. I could use a very strong swear-word in times like these. I'll say it tomorrow.

[TransparentHearts]

And that is a very powerful message in a very short poem. Well done job with that.

[TransparentHearts]

I think that there's a chance of success and a chance of survival. It all depends on the outlook and the attitude, and one key element-hope-to never give up and never give in to nobody, anywhere, at any time or place. Its never looking back and never regretting what choice you have made, but if the choice was a bad one, there is always time to change that and make it something positive.

[Madness is Insanity]

I doubt it. I think this is my best piece ever, and the way I'm going its going to stay that way...

[Alexxia]

Wow, simply amazing, it doesn't seem to have a purpose but in the end, it has a lesson that's impossible to learn for any human being. How did you do it???
One of the most amazing peices I've ever read. It seemed to be there in my mind saying it, though that could just be my crazy talking.

[me, myself and brenton]

no i cant figure it out i love it though
brenton

[Madness is Insanity]

Notice that it is also a acrostic poem, while being a 'free' poem.