Catch

Catch

A Poem by Melissa
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Written July 2008 for L

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Let’s leave these

ominous thoughts behind, these questions of

Now, and Then, and When, and How.

Guesses will do us no good; they’ll be disguised like

amber stars on a dark

night,

lost until we discover that

one moment, suspended in future memories.

Nothing matters but us.  Forget where we’re

going, or not going.

A forbidden journey, perhaps, but

not a mistake.
 

© 2010 Melissa


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I do like your poems. Nice writes.

Posted 8 Years Ago


how nice, how wonderfully nice, to be tiptoeing through these pages and discover another fine poet, one who can say and see with grace and precision, and depth, the simple and complex things of life...how very nice

Posted 10 Years Ago


I love "Then & Now" pieces of art, and it's told here very beautifully. I love how cosmic your descriptions are when describing how you want to get away. Very good write!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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A very assertive piece about the here and now. I am often torn as to whether it is best to plan and chase that plan, or to live in the here and now. You've intensified the question.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This poem rocks! As aforementioned, the last stanza is not only inspiring, but intriguing. And the term "future memories"...nice one! That is some clever wordsmithing.
Great job!
-Alex

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very well done. Great Job.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Very heartfelt poem, written from your heart for someone special you care about.

Superb! Melissa

Art

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thank you.

--Long An

Posted 12 Years Ago


i know this topic is very unsatisfying for you but i think its beautiful that you know it's no mistake. those future memories will come if they are ment to. i love you.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ahhh I am very intrigued by this write and the ending was fantastic

A forbidden journey, perhaps, but
not a mistake.

So true that sometimes the crazy ideas we have are often the ones that bring us the most joy.

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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