Bobbing For Nectarines

    afraid I’d drown drown drown in a gallon-sized, white-colored bucket while nectarines and water made moving shadows on the side, the nectarines looked slimy in the water was there one that didn’t have a bite taken out of it? yes but the water got in my eyes and I walked away wiping tears and nectarine water with the back of my hand

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This could use a little formatting.

Unless, you wanted to convey the writing of a typical child. If so, great job :]