public couples

this is an opinion...not a fact. if i state like a fact...im sorry

I know you love each other

And trust me that is sweet.

But do you need to show off?

And announce in every tweet?

 

I know you’re very lucky

That he is not a dick.

But really? come on

Don’t invade his profile pic.

 

I know you must feel dandy

Your girlfriends a real keeper

but bloody hell you’re whipped

she’s like your high school teacher.

 

But how do I know this?

Your love life is desperate.

So public, so loud

IMO  they should be separate.

Reviews

[Baby Ricochet]

Young people drool all over each other when they're in love man. THat's what you're supposed to do at that age. When I was dating my now X wife we couldn't be in close proximity of each other without making out for twenty minutes. It was actually kinda distracting. We were always late for s**t cause of it It was f**king awesome man! Like a lot of things I did in my teens and twenties I know I'm never gonna do it again because I'm different now. What a buzz kill that is. Oh yeah I almost forgot, the poem. Bustin a few good rhymes, has the characteristic DatVirgo emotional charm. Outstanding work man! (Pounding fist on table as I type)

[nigrum homonculus]

damn! you lot sounded like a freaky couple. sounds kinda awesome though and i do understand where you're coming from on it. hell i wish i experience some of that man! characteristic datvirgo charm? thanks! no one has said that about my work. glad you enjoyed it! LOL seriously man you're reviews make me laugh

[Steven Cash]

The worst thing about it is they are drooling over this person, and not even serious about the relationship. Not even enganged. Just another boyfriend.

LOL, then they dump em a few months later.

[Mia]

HAHAHAHA! I love this poem. Ah young love...someone should really look into changing the saying from "ignorance is bliss" to "young love is bliss"

[Otsana]

I couldnt agree with you more, I really dont like it when people put their relationship on display like its a trophy or something. I think some things can be kept for the bedroom and for each other. Nice poem!

[nigrum homonculus]

exactly man. thank you for the review man. much appreciate your kind words.

[Shimmerbliss/CAF]

We didn't use to have all the technology - tweets, social networks, iphones, etc. We had to call each other, or go out. Sometimes, all the over-the-top airing of each step of our lives can make me want to say TMI ! I do though, agree in part with Baby Ric in that when you are newly in love and get together - in person- sometimes it is a bit overwhelming and you just can't help yourself. Hopefully, though, you take it elsewhere. Great job! See what you got started? :)

[That_Girl]

The quieter a relationship is, the longer it lasts. Drama is kept at bay and everyone is happier. :) Great poem!

[Harley (arbiter)]

XD funyy man! But not all are like that. It does get annoying though ._/. There all like "oooh I'm in loove" and that's all they talk about! Nothing else! Not even the nascar race D: and then bam! Ya lose a friend. Anyway awesome poem!

[nigrum homonculus]

yeah hence the title "public couples" tried to make it specific rather than general. it really does man. LOL nascar? awwwwh s**t. thanks for reading bro!

[Harley (arbiter)]

Yeah man that was a good idea. And yes :'( it was terrible. We were watching the race and she was all he was talking about. O_/o it sucked. Then he was like well fine your not gonna listen to me so imma leave. Commence fight. Lose friend. Move on. He wasn't really that good of a friend anyway. Lol Welcome man ^_^