Ingestion of Love

An ingestion of Love

Dust ardent pleasures

Across the pulsing heart

Sending spiraling shivers

Of emancipating desire

Intangible reaction

Quakes within the soul

Billowing fire

Out of control

Searing lave bursts

From each sweat

Soaked pore

Calling for its owner

Like it never has 

before

Body racked 

with urgent need

Pleading it cries

Begging for what 

It seeks

Elusive as always

Physical touch is 

But a wisp

upon the wind

Reviews

[I Am Svetlana]

We all take love in a different way. We inhale or exhale the feelings and that is how we deal with love. Though love is different for everyone and each person has their own story and experience. Good or bad, love can make or break us. It's just all about how we approach it and are able to handle the good and bad times. The obstacles and how we get past them.

[Neville]

the lava flows again I see ................... a good read & steamy stuff indeed :)

[Poetic Beauty]

This is an old poem that I am revisiting. I really like this one

[Neville]

and why not indeed .. I did :)

[Poetic Beauty]

There are many of my poems that I love. I know usually who or what they are about just by reading them

[Mr. D]

I ingested love many times in my life, and every single time, it has left me with mental diarrhea, physical nausea, and loss of desire. I guess your desire burns brighter than mine. If that's the case, good luck with that. You'll need it.

[Poetic Beauty]

Oh this has been an on going complicated tale for him ver a decade now. We love each we just don’t live in the same state anymore.

[Mr. D]

If it makes you feel better, I got to watch my ex-girlfriend through elementary, middle, and high schools, marry, divorce, and have three kids with someone. But I'm not saying that for sympathy. I need none. I'm just saying it.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

I love the peaceful and gentle flow in your words. very nice.

[Poetic Beauty]

This is an old one that I was revisiting last night. I really like this one.

[Enigma]

"Elusive as always
Physical touch is
But a wisp
upon the wind"

The pace and raw passion clearly speaks out. Well penned. :)

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you. This is a piece I haven't read for quite sometime. I am glad people are still enjoying it.

[Aianarie (INACTIVE)]

Lovely concept. I found the flow a little bumpy, though. Other than that, it's a great poem. :-)

[Poetic Beauty]

I am glad you liked the concept. Sometimes I would rather get the concept across than a completely smooth flow. Sorry it was bumpy for you.

[Colleen a Bean]

I love how you decribed how love can control your mind and make you want to be with the one you love and if your not how torturous it can be on a person anyway great poem I loved it.

[Poetic Beauty]

I think this piece turned out really well. Thank you for your kind words

[Colleen a Bean]

lol It did it's amazing. was this poem about anyone imparticular or was it just a poem that popped into your head?

[Poetic Beauty]

The ingestion idea piped in my mins but my love poems usually have someone attached to them

[Colleen a Bean]

lol ya so do mine but I like your poems better haha keep up the good writing lol

[Poetic Beauty]

Thanks. My poetry is always evolving just like me

[Poetic Beauty]

You describe some elusiveness very well. I could find myself in your thoughts.
Beautiful, honest as it came out, and True words... I enjoyed this piece.

E.L.

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you I am glad you could feel and understand the.piece

[Wondering Mind]

it's all consuming, isn't it?
Sensual expressions

[Poetic Beauty]

It can be. I have learned that you can always be with someone you deeply love so accept.it enjoy the feeling and live in the reality that it may only happen on dreams

[Poetic Beauty]

Can't

[Tina Kline]

Very passionate and erotic...excellent imagery used in this poem. Its very hot all the way! I really enjoyed reading this poem.

[Poetic Beauty]

Thanks sometimes my pieces are sensual without intended them to be that emotion just creeps out from time to time

[Tina Kline]

It makes for very good poetry. :)

[~ tides ~]

Very interesting approach on this piece... I like. Can see I'm going to have to dig in your crates a little more. Good job.

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you. It is a complex idea of we take love in and completely let us feed us