YOU.

You rip me down from that place you built for me.

i say something and you spit it back with deadly force

a twisted rack of what it was.

you rip and shred and turn and slash and burn whatever intent i had.

you see what you wanted in between your lies and your eyes and brutal tongue.

your twisted thoughts reveal how young you are.

i pass you. outclass you. and you want to tear me down.

i am what you wished for. i was what you lived for. and you cant stand it.

you created me.

i am your f*****g Narcissus flower.

i can see your reflection in my eyes and it destroys you.

you cant stand to say that im right. your wrong. yet i know only because of you.  

and you have succeeded in what you created

and you have made a monster and mother how i love you.

 

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Wolfwind Words]

Another rage against the mother piece. Life can be a chaotic swirl of confusion and frustration at times. I think this piece is a good show of how a daughter feels pushed away and held captive at the same time to a mother who is at a loss to understand the meaning behind having children.

A powerful yet deep set of words.

Aaron Wolfie Maycroft

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Now that was brutally raw and packed with emotional rage... when a parent is jealous of their child it really is pathetic, they should want nothing but the best for them... I like that you showed some class while venting your frustrations.

[bluessadmood]

This was so nice ..but really I dont know why I like it,really liked it..sometimes its like between the line thoughts
that entangle us without us knowing why,and this is a sign of a lovely write..
you rip me from a place you built for me..I say something and you spit it back in a twisted way
You shred and turn and burn every intent..I am what you wished for lived for but you cant stand it
You created me(my favorite line)..see your reflection in my eyes
you cant stand it that I am right and you are wrong
You succeeded in what you created
you made a monster ,and a mother and I just love you
Lovely thoughts that just call for you to read..i really enjoyed this..