Blame; Take Control

Its That God You Dont Believe In

Its That Family Youre Leaving

The Lies That You Arent Seeing

When You Tell Them To Yourself

And How Bout You?

What The F**k Did You Do?

Its Your Life Now Take It

How Much Worse Will That Make It?

You Say Who You Are Is Not Yourself

So Who's To Blame For Your Own Hell

You Say You Always Were Alone

Well If That's True The Fault's Your Own

Yet You Blame God

You'll Blame Your Girlfriend

You Blame Mommy

The Drugs Youre Taking

But How Bout You?

What The F**k Did You Do?

Well Its Your Life So F*****g Take It

If God's Not Real Than Nothing's Sacred

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

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... brilliant!!! ... brutally introspective and thread bare ... i love how you don't mince words ... i love how you address the issue head on ... this verse embodies the beauty of direct and lucid verse ... it startles one and makes one sit up and think straight ... a soul-stirring write ... indeed ... "If God's Not Real Than Nothing's Sacred" ... (highest rating) ...

[Ruth]

Everything questioned, nicely done!
You have gone full circle in this:)
xx

[Emily Quinn]

its kind of unsettling in a pessimistic way but its taken from an interesting point of veiw. it seems angry; no maybe not angry but frustrated, its well written

[Lexi =]]

Great Poem. It's True. People make up excuses and blame other's for there own mistakes. I LOVE THIS LINE
"What the f**k did you do?
Well its your life so f*****g take it"
Love it.
=]

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

So many people use every excuse for being miserable and passing it on to others but in the end as you stated it is all up to them. Very profound poetry.