Cowboys Only Line Dance

Cowboys Only Line Dance

A Poem by Einstein Noodle
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just for fun and exercise :))) captcha .... "mating" ...i am not lying!

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Cowboys only Line Dance

Image result for dancers
Her contemporary footwork slid silk 
across steel grey flint
a hint ...........
she plie'd and squared her hips;
breeze, sway stepping in line
Image result for cowboy dancers
with sublime electric quick draw and
John Wayne swag
He backs up ....
bows his head 
tips his hat and
smiling wide sky charm   -   speaking
milk tongued draaaaaaaaawl .........
says:
"I only line dance ma'am! ....................."
E.
8/22/2019

© 2019 Einstein Noodle


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dear Gene... I met Roger at "Bronco Billy's" in 1987 with a
Band that arrived at seven pm every night.
I had my eyes on a Cowboy at the end of the Bar.
I asked him to dance, and he said, "Not unless they play
"Because of you, God made Oklahoma". I returned to my
Table, thought for awhile, and then asked the Band to
play that song. I have kept him in Cowboy Boots to this day.
He has kept me "In line" ever since. I think your poem is
very whimsical. truly, Pat

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Einstein Noodle

5 Months Ago

you are too cool in school girl! :)
Patricia Wedel

5 Months Ago

Yes, dear E.. life is a school where we continue to learn... especially from poetry, we gain a lot o.. read more
barleygirl

5 Months Ago

This is an awesome share, Pat! Such an inspirational pair, you two! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie



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I love this poem with its message. The talent struggle between the two sexes, the impressions when both perform, the two different sets of styles and how they can mend or co-mingle, the truth telling. Wow sir. Short but it speaks volumes.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


Einstein Noodle

2 Weeks Ago

great to have your visit sir ... and i am very happy you read this one .. i had a lot of fun putting.. read more
Sami Khalil

2 Weeks Ago

You are welcome sir. Great New Year.
& they continued line dancing into the sunset.
i finally 'got' one of your free style poems.... hurray !!! 👍
cheerio carola

Posted 1 Month Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Month Ago

ohhhhhhhhhh God bless you for trying Carola ... and i am really happy you see that ending ... it lif.. read more
Very interesting poem. I think it would be fun to visit America where the wild west took place.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

2 Months Ago

Jung Lee! what a nice surprise to have your visit ... it has been a while ... yes .. the wild west ... read more
JungLee

2 Months Ago

Thank you!
What is captcha mating? Are you referring to the "electric slide?" This brings me many fond memories... I really enjoy your writing style.

MissE*

Posted 2 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

2 Months Ago

the captcha is a scramble of letters required to copy to submit your work... sometimes the letters a.. read more
This isnt a match made in heaven like a tango with united fronts but oh so entertaining and humorous lol I can just hear that cowboy drawl. Nicely written too!

Posted 3 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

3 Months Ago

perfect andrew! so happy for your take on this .. love that humor sir! one of my favorite movies and.. read more
Perhaps he’s a bit intimidated by her skillful way with classical footwork. Too bad for him, might have been a dance to remember.

I confess I have never line danced even though I’m from the land of country music. I guess I’d end up being his opposite and turning him down if he shuffled up to ask me. So, I shouldn’t judge.

A fun poem from you, E. I like the dynamics of it. It moves like dance across the page.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

3 Months Ago

well....... a shuffle can be a shuffle........ or it can be a shuuuuuuuuuffle :))))))))))) thanks fo.. read more
Line dancing . . . isn't that what poets do?! So your cowboy is a "cowboy poet." Interesting piece E.
T

Posted 3 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

3 Months Ago

ahahahaha i guess it is kentuck ... never thought of it that way :)))))))))))))))))) sure appreciate.. read more
this poem is beautifuly chaotic; I imagined the scene as I was reading it. I always believe that dancers tame the negative energy and transform it into dance moves.... I love music and i love dancing and I love your poem... "blaame it on the Boogie"!!! lol
thank you for sharing

Posted 3 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

3 Months Ago

https://youtu.be/MYQBd9ordbE
:) beautifully chaotic makes me chuckle my friend .. and i love .. read more
cluelesspen__

3 Months Ago

I don't know why people consider "moshing" a type of dancing... I mean, what's so fun about that? read more
Einstein Noodle

3 Months Ago

amen! :).................
Cute! There is beauty and precision in one and earth and home in the other. Urban Cowboy is one of my favorite movies so I loved the insert of the John Travolta image. I think one portrays a dream, while the other portrays life; and we all need a dream in life. Well penned.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

3 Months Ago

thanks for reviewing Linda .. i like your take on this .. dream and reality .. dancing together ;) U.. read more
in my past life I was in a square and round dance club.. I never learned to line dance.. and I never experienced a lack of cowboy partners.. it is one of the things I miss.. there are no clubs where I live now.. I love your poem.. it brought back fond memories.. the cowboy's I know are certainly not one trick ponies..

Posted 3 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

3 Months Ago

if you get the chance to attend a céilí i would encourage you to go ... i have been to a few and t.. read more
olla

3 Months Ago

thank you.. I rarely turn down an opportunity to learn a few more steps.. it's usually other conside.. read more
Einstein Noodle

3 Months Ago

yes ... the Highlanders (me Ma's side) and the Emerald Isle (me Da's) are close as close ... i moved.. read more

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