Dance of the Fey

Dance of the Fey

A Poem by Rhea752
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for a contest. the piece has to be one line long.

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Wings flitting and arms spinning; the Fey have come to dance the night away.

© 2012 Rhea752


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Short, and simple, yet it completely says everything about the Fae (well not everything). Very nice

Posted 10 Years Ago


Highly short and yet intriguing in its simplicity. Great work, chickadee.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhea752

10 Years Ago

teehee chickadee :P thank you for the review :)
It may be a line long to it tells a story.

Posted 10 Years Ago


paints a picture

Posted 10 Years Ago


Wow! Great line!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Short sweet.

Posted 10 Years Ago


I like it :) Nice job.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Short yet long-lasting in terms of imagery. I like this.

Posted 10 Years Ago


I think this'll do well. Good luck!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Rhea752

10 Years Ago

ya. i could have done it last year for my school but i was wimpy
ewest1220

10 Years Ago

That's awesome! I've been published a few times so I'm excited you got your first taste :) hopefull.. read more
Rhea752

10 Years Ago

Thanks :D
This makes me want to be there dancing actually. I love how this brings that forward, nice one line.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Rhea752

10 Years Ago

thank you :)

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Rhea752
Rhea752

Middle Of My Daydreams, FL



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I am a 15 year old girl who loves to read, write, act, and draw. I just started writing seriously about 2 years ago. I've been published a few times in small online magazines. I am trying to find out .. more..

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