what id give

what id give

A Poem by just take a breath

I bet you don't know

That on every 11:11, i make a wish.

A wish about you.

-

Your a million miles away

And here, i will stay

Waiting for that moment

Where i can hear you say…

“I love you”

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The way you make my heart race

And the way you make me laugh

You don't know what id give…

To have you here for that.

© 2011 just take a breath


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It reminds me of when I was once so in love with this one muse that even when we were angry and apart from one another I would look up at the moon and wonder if he was curious if I was thinking about him. Sounds silly and somewhat cliche but that's how this piece made me feel. So young and so simply in love. Good write :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


4 of 4 people found this review constructive.




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Heartfelt..!!!

Good write..!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


This was so relatable, great job.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Your poetry is so relatable, I love it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Great read, and I've learnt something here as well about 11:11.

Maybe that is what I have been missing my whole life, making a wish at that time lol!

Posted 12 Years Ago


I know many of my daughter friends who do the same as in the poem. Making a wish on 11:11. A short and sweet poem of love and hope. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


0 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Sweet miss you poem.This would make a nice thinking of you note.I love it.11/11 must mean alot!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It reminds me of when I was once so in love with this one muse that even when we were angry and apart from one another I would look up at the moon and wonder if he was curious if I was thinking about him. Sounds silly and somewhat cliche but that's how this piece made me feel. So young and so simply in love. Good write :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


4 of 4 people found this review constructive.

This is a sweet, wishful poem. It's cute. It's also a great way to tell someone how you feel if that was the need. Great write.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on May 12, 2011
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just take a breath
just take a breath

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about me? im 15, im a girl, im blond, and tend to take my feelings out through music and writing. if you knew me, you would know non-believers drive me insane! this includes people that say "your t.. more..

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