My dear lady but not mine

My dear lady but not mine

A Poem by poetry-kiddo alienbaba
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My greeting and salutations to all adventurous women

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My dear lady and not mine...



Saturday, February 23, 2008 
My dear lady and not mine...
Your Karmic fate has pre-destined...
All you have and what`s not thine...

Living on a reverie, 
Leaving it to revere me,
Just as I revere thee...

The Sun doth hath it's rays on you...
Sea-sprayed foam from waves so blue..
While I try and pray for you...

Fickle minds may gather dust...
Lonely lads they harbor lust...
Though valentine's may trust...

Laughter while your feet tread sand...
Bad emotions you`ve none to mend...
But watch out for the by-lane bend...

It`s good you run on the green-hill yonder...
And as I write this I smile and wonder...
About those resting calmly six-feet under...

Hello again God bless your way...
And yes I know what you want to say...
You`re very much alive...
This Moony-woony day!

© 2019 poetry-kiddo alienbaba


Author's Note

poetry-kiddo alienbaba
You can tell me what you feel....

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Smooth and I like the tale it speaks of. Your style of language is rare to find these days and I like how you incorporate it. The only thing I would suggest is to break up your piece in stanzas instead of one big paragraph. it's easier to read that way and gives it the flow it deserves.


Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

poetry-kiddo alienbaba

8 Years Ago

Yes I shall do that C....thx u



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It's a unique style with a deep message within it's lovely words....all is not 'lust' but disgust on certain monny-woony days. I am mesmerized by your painting skills, a picture so profound is not easy to pen.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

poetry-kiddo alienbaba

8 Years Ago

Thansk you for your review and taking the time. The picture my lady is not by me but a download from.. read more
I love this... Beautifully penned!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

poetry-kiddo alienbaba

8 Years Ago

Thx Robbie....its sincere:) Its for a dead stranger who keeps contacting me..
Feels as if you smile as you watch the lives of others...warning them about dangers while at the same time acknowledging their happiness.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

poetry-kiddo alienbaba

8 Years Ago

Aint that me now d,d. u know me like you do! Thanku
This has a great tone and rhythm. The rhyme doesn't sound forced, and it helps with the flow of the poem.
I like the "revere" stanza.

Beautiful. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

poetry-kiddo alienbaba

8 Years Ago

Revere...in highest respect:)
Free ryhme and flowing yesss! thanku
flow to the human nature which spring time is your feminine measure locked on the sun light on thighs eyed line to your perception guru in shadow but never cold in your observation..good stuff

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

poetry-kiddo alienbaba

8 Years Ago

Thanks w.mojo ur reviews are always a joy to the eyes.
I love the tone of this, the rhyme scheme makes it run smoothly to great effect. I agree with 'CorruptThoughts', the style of language is interesting and a breath of fresh air, I'm a fan of the Metaphysical poets so the style of language appeals to me. Great work

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

poetry-kiddo alienbaba

8 Years Ago

I am Metaphyical personified:)
Thanks for your lovely answer!
What I feel...........the poet watches one he adores from afar and smiles at he knows what the future holds for her contains sun and smiles. His thoughts wonder as her writes to those who have already passed. Your style use in this poem is very original and refreshing. I enjoyed this

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

poetry-kiddo alienbaba

8 Years Ago

Thanks so Much the poet knows what the future holds for everyone. as the future is in the past...
This is very interesting...I liked the pattern and the thought process....

Posted 10 Years Ago


poetry-kiddo alienbaba

8 Years Ago

Thank Babe ...you are kind too
i like the different style. I like the subject matter and how you weave other things into the poem like little gems.

Posted 10 Years Ago


poetry-kiddo alienbaba

8 Years Ago

Little Gems :0 they are thank you Lydia. pls visit again

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