Shaken

Shaken

A Poem by sansrity sinha

Another day passed by,
Another night to mourn..
Harsh times and bitter quarrels
Test all lives, spare none..

For each breath now counts,
Each soul now prays,
I only wish its over..

I remember that golden past,
When life was full of duties,
Now each moment brings only pity..

I pray daily during dawn and dusk,
Spare us, why so ruthless?
Why so tough?

In His name,
What have they done?
Life is cheap and so is death

Someday Our payers will be heard,
Someday they shall get answered!
Till then, I wait, for the time to pass..

© 2016 sansrity sinha


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Hello sansrity sinha,

I really like the first verse:

Another day passed by,
Another night to mourn..
Harsh times and bitter quarrels
Test all lives, spare none..

Overall, it is an intense poem. It is sad and very reminiscent of many of the struggles which are going on in our world today. There was one line where the wording was a bit awkward. The line: "I only wish its over.." Consider changing "its" to "it is over." It would give it a better flow. Other than that, it is a wonderful poem.

Thank you for sharing!

Kind regards,

Schatzi

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sansrity sinha

2 Years Ago

hi Schatzi,
thank you so much.. it has been a long time since certain regions have been longi.. read more
Schatzi

2 Years Ago

Yes, very true.



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beautiful words written here

Posted 2 Years Ago


Prayers make us strong, we pray to gather that courage to fight against the odds... Nice one anyway....

Posted 2 Years Ago


"Someday Our payers will be heard,
Someday they shall get answered!
Till then, I wait, for the time to pass.."

We generally wait for the answers, but hen we ask ourselves 'what after that?'...... Loved the way you've portrayed that in the last stanza! And also to mention an amazing opening stanza!

keep writing :D

Posted 2 Years Ago


sansrity sinha

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much. I only want these bad times to end..thanks for the appreciation:)
WoW!!!!
heartfelt........powerful.......beautiful.......
when reason has fled the lands.......prayer is what we are left with........
time shall pass......no matter what.........atleast something is yet to be corrupted........

thought provoking and profound.....
i loved it!!!
:)

Posted 2 Years Ago


sansrity sinha

2 Years Ago

thank you so much! :) dark times shall pass...Prayers and cries of innocent hearts will be heard and.. read more
Pushkar Prabhat

2 Years Ago

Amen........
you are welcome........ :) :)
Harsh times are with us, yes. Nice write with regard to the life around us. We all must pray.

Posted 2 Years Ago


sansrity sinha

2 Years Ago

yeah..we should all pray for things to get better
Hello sansrity sinha,

I really like the first verse:

Another day passed by,
Another night to mourn..
Harsh times and bitter quarrels
Test all lives, spare none..

Overall, it is an intense poem. It is sad and very reminiscent of many of the struggles which are going on in our world today. There was one line where the wording was a bit awkward. The line: "I only wish its over.." Consider changing "its" to "it is over." It would give it a better flow. Other than that, it is a wonderful poem.

Thank you for sharing!

Kind regards,

Schatzi

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sansrity sinha

2 Years Ago

hi Schatzi,
thank you so much.. it has been a long time since certain regions have been longi.. read more
Schatzi

2 Years Ago

Yes, very true.
In those places where so many are faced with these things I pray for peace for you. Valentine

Posted 2 Years Ago


sansrity sinha

2 Years Ago

yeah.. I only wish a better tomorrow comes soon and things don't worsen anymore.
Citizen's perspective about war

Posted 2 Years Ago



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