The Inner voice..

When we live each day of

our lives,

there's something always with us,

called,

our  INNER VOICE....

Every breath we take,

in each resolutions we make,

in every decisions we take,

in everything, real or fake,

Its always with us,

to keep us safe...

in me,

in you,

and in everyone

around you,

Its that something,

which is always true..

In anger,

in pain,

in frustration,

in worry,

or even in tension,

Its that something,

which gives us strength,

and helps us, to face it

friends....

In happiness,

in achievements,

in success,

or any such great conditions,

Its that something,

which encourages us,

to go ahead with them...

No matter, how wise,

or great one becomes,but 

Its that something,

which is alive in everyone,

till our last breath,

and life,s end.....

Helping us always,

in every situation....

so, hear it friends,

as much as you can,

trust it deeply,

as deep as you can,

for if you walk with it,

hand in hand,

then living this life,

no more remains

a big confusion...

as it will guide you,

the actual way, to be

with it in all situations....

and sway you away,

from life's all unsolvable equations...

 

Author's Note

i hope you all loved reading this...
please do review and rate it...
regards,
saumya

Reviews

[Akshat♥]

The use of brown color has a great impact on the poem :)
The picture is really nice :)
I completely agree with you :)
Our thoughts make our inner voice :)
Some has bad thoughts and some has good...
we all fight with it everyday :)
You showed us real path to walk through...
Saumya oyur writing skills are increasing day by day...
am glad about that :)
Keep writing dear!!

[Saumya]

thank you for the really great review....:) and its great to knw, that my writings improving..will work more on it... thank u once again:)

[Akshat♥]

you are welcome :)

[Leslie Philibert]

a poet that convinces with wisdom...

[smilempsn]

Very nice to be read :)

[Astro]

Again sticking with the positive writing which is refreshing Saumya, but I would like to see you employ more figures of speech to your writing for dramatic effect. Most of your work seems like motivational dialogue.

As to editing: You don't need to pluralize in these lines after the words "each" and "every", "in each resolutions we make,
in every decisions we take,"

The use of color separating parts of your speech might seem beautiful, but it distracts a bit to the reader because it almost seems like there is a separate dialogue, but there isn't it's just a continuation of the previous thought. Overall, for someone who wasn't brought up speaking English, this is still very nice, especially in sentiment(as your work normally is). Although, I tend to disagree slightly with your analysis of trusting our inner voices, because if you were ever afflicted by addiction, you would know that sometimes that same inner voice can become corrupted and drive you to do destructive things that otherwise you would stay away from, but I'll chalk that up to you being young and less familiar with that aspect of the inner voice. Keep writing your outlook is always refreshing.

[Aethereal]

Our Inner Voice helps us make the better choice. Psychologist call it the Super Ego. Our Super Ego develops in childhood depending on how we're brought up by our parents and culture.

[SteveB]

Thank you so much for sharing this and for sharing your abiding faith.

[Saumya]

thank you:)

[annie lee]

Saumya, another perfect expression of your faith and your calling to share it with others. You are a treasure.

[Saumya]

o thank you my friend:)

[Sami Khalil]

A very important voice indeed of who we are and it speaks to us continuosly . You have penned a great poem full of wisdom...:)

[Saumya]

thank you:)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[Jack...]

If only we would listen to ourselves everything would be much brighter I think. Very nice my friend.

[Saumya]

thank you jack:)

[Rita L. Sev]

Our inner voice is indeed a constant friend... a good and positive write, Saumya!

[Saumya]

thank you dear:)