Fire

Fire, Fire,
Burning bright
Created by you
To warm the night
Hold off the dark
Until the light
Fire, Fire,
Burning bright.

Reviews

[Jennifer Marie Theresa ..]

A great poem about a powerful element, amazing

[Rima]

short, flowed well, I like it, great job

[Edalene Connell]

I like it, the flow was good.

[~AmateurWriter]

Nicely done. I like it.

[Andrew'sWonderland]

You could feel the flames as you read through "Fire"! Well written! Keep up the Great Work! :)