Vacation

(A gang of four friends, married couples indeed, planned for a vacation and chose to drive to a remote place. They found a lonely spot and parked their car, and started to walk)   

We walked through the road, long and dark,
Suddenly at a distance we encountered a spark,

We walked towards to see what it is,
Suddenly heard a sound like the snake hiss,

I slipped down and felt the deep pain,
It thundered suddenly and showered heavy rain,

All at once we saw a house so vast,
Situated in a place weird and outcast,

As we entered the big dark house,
Strongly holding hands of each of our spouse,

With broken doors and closed window,
On the wall, we saw a big black shadow,

With a sudden fear our feet became numb,
We stood there shocked and turned dumb,

With long nails, the shadow neared us,
As though it’s going to kill us without any fuss,

With big scream we started to run,
After reaching the road end, we laughed saying it was also fun.

****(An imaginary piece of writing)   ****

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AWARDS/BADGES WON:

 Death Shadow Award 

Apr 16, 2010

• Shadows And Ghosts From The Grave
• Vacation

Fantastic Award

May 1, 2010

• Fantasy
• Vacation

4th runner up

May 20, 2011

• Shadows
• Vacation

Jet-black Award

Jul 2, 2010

• BLACK
• Vacation

Reviews

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I enjoyed this write.
This is amazing!

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Congrats on your winning poem. Well Done.

[deeps]

This is awesome! I enjoyed this write.
Truly amazing, at the end I found it cute.
A write very well written.

[untoldtruth]

that was great :)