I Am Born

I Am Born

A Poem by ShameemAkhtar

Out of tears I am born
A drop,
drowned amidst others


The ripples carry me through,
carry me across
Drops burbling around


I am born
And I am drowned
And I fuse


I embrace silence
My heart kisses death
And more tears come


I am born
And I die.
Tears of my own making


Maybe
It’s only to die
That I am born


Out of tears

Tears that flow
In my veins.


Blood drops down my cheeks
My eyes wallow in a pool
A pool where I am buried


In tears I am born
With tears
I am born


Only


To depart


.

© 2011 ShameemAkhtar


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Very well written ,
I like this statement as well
Maybe
It's only to die
That I am born
I know I, feel the world around me as if my heart pumps openly on my chest!
I die, with much pain , living life~
but I am born into happiness with the life I live~
& Sometimes I just must die a little to be born again!
Great Write~

Posted 12 Years Ago


I like the logic and the question raised by this poem.
"Maybe
It’s only to die
That I am born"
I believe we know pain to know pleasure. Must know sadness to know happiness. Life is a lesson to find peace and calm in a life. I like the ending to the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


Birth can take place both naturally and as an experience of rebirth. Where the natural impulses of eros are mixed with the death impulse, it avoids any sense of the natural rise of the life impulses and provides no other alternative but to work towards the experience of rebirth. A poem that points to resurrection in the lives of individuals.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Dark and well-written!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wow, I adore this piece. The flow is incredibly.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I love this writing! It is superb! This could be interpreted in many different ways.

Posted 12 Years Ago


A great deal of pain and despair here.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on August 28, 2011
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ShameemAkhtar
ShameemAkhtar

Port Louis, Mauritius



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