Chapter One: A moment of Peace

This is a work of fiction.

    
      Welcome to the City of Sulfur Springs, yes Sulfur Springs Texas. That's me and my friend, let me introduce us, my name is Brandon Crawford and my friend his names Loki Gress. The mall is alive with shoppers, it's the 14th of February men frantically looking for the perfect gift for that special someone. The reason we're at the mall is to watch this strange occurrence, it seems so ugh happy. No we aren't Gothic we just find it annoying. cry's of joy, tears of surprise it all screws with your mind.
    Any way the world is to cheery, for us at least so we come to observe and ridicule, well for now at least, we are both Christian to the bone. One time we saw this, young couple the guy was ready to propose to his girlfriend as he got down on his knee and as he pulled out the ring she, disposed I guess you could call ti... She rejected him dumped him on the spot Valentines day during the proposal. The poor poor b*****d, having his heart broken by that insufferable b***h.

Reviews

[Sam]

Great job, can't wait to read more of this :)

[Loki Gress]

Theres more out and on the way... Thanks for the feed back